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when we were cool (not now)...
we would walk without
worrying about what we
were walking into...
Published 8th Oct 2013
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Anonymous
9th Oct 2013 3:39am
The star of this poem is (not now), it gets all the credit in putting things in perspective, nice touch Darford of having before and after imagery.
9th Oct 2013 10:34am
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9th Oct 2013 7:37pm
We never walk
without worrying
as long as we
have something to expect.
Such dark thoughts, dart.
So very well done.
without worrying
as long as we
have something to expect.
Such dark thoughts, dart.
So very well done.
9th Oct 2013 10:40pm
