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A'Goofus'Critique'ofA13word(17syllable,of-course)HaaKooNerveStrike,Yow
(eXcerpted from: DkZk's Great Communiques From I'rony[Deep]Paradoxymoronia)
oh man, now this'n is a
loop'dee'dooper for what-is-left-of-'me'
in this socalled world,
as iyam alone on the beach,
thee edge of this socalled world, alone,
or wit my brother's dear 6 lb dawgie.....
no
sandy hand to comfort inside my shorts as eye gaze at the
marinant eternity that will likely
'take' me
during my risky cavortings
(how does 'cavortions' sound?) in big surf & swift currents
a mile south of where any other
'beach lovers' would ever not[font=Georgia]ice
my tragic hand above the waters
(before that fatal gulp)...
but that's why 6 lb Alice it wit me....
i'd feel terrible to not be able to drive her home[/font]
jesu'cristi! , life is com~plicated.....
O'mother'o'mercy! , & fun-as-hell aswell...
dkzk2013dkzkdkzkFreeOriggyNullPooms+Pxtrs,Ltd.
oh man, now this'n is a
loop'dee'dooper for what-is-left-of-'me'
in this socalled world,
as iyam alone on the beach,
thee edge of this socalled world, alone,
or wit my brother's dear 6 lb dawgie.....
no
sandy hand to comfort inside my shorts as eye gaze at the
marinant eternity that will likely
'take' me
during my risky cavortings
(how does 'cavortions' sound?) in big surf & swift currents
a mile south of where any other
'beach lovers' would ever not[font=Georgia]ice
my tragic hand above the waters
(before that fatal gulp)...
but that's why 6 lb Alice it wit me....
i'd feel terrible to not be able to drive her home[/font]
jesu'cristi! , life is com~plicated.....
O'mother'o'mercy! , & fun-as-hell aswell...
dkzk2013dkzkdkzkFreeOriggyNullPooms+Pxtrs,Ltd.
Published 8th Oct 2013
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8th Oct 2013 11:55pm
9th Oct 2013 2:18am
9th Oct 2013 2:52am
now now you wouldnt want t' meet yer end in the ocean, that's where all the fishes pisses n'shitz frr goodness sake.
9th Oct 2013 3:08am
good to see ye....thnx4 droppin by
fishy pizz'n'poopoo any nothing compared 1000s of bilge dumps per day(per-hour) by
human shippy dippers of kapitalista fortunes
I still like it under there Ha
fishy pizz'n'poopoo any nothing compared 1000s of bilge dumps per day(per-hour) by
human shippy dippers of kapitalista fortunes
I still like it under there Ha
