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Love Looks
Its when I'm out and you kiss me
Not urgent or needy and hot like
When we are on our bed of love
But soft and sensual just whats required
As you squeeze my hand, not grasping
each others in naked unison but light
to touch as a reminder you are here for me
As you look at me, not tear filled ones returned
crying out when you send me there
but deep soulful love looks with interest.
Its when I'm out with you that makes me
Love you more.
Not urgent or needy and hot like
When we are on our bed of love
But soft and sensual just whats required
As you squeeze my hand, not grasping
each others in naked unison but light
to touch as a reminder you are here for me
As you look at me, not tear filled ones returned
crying out when you send me there
but deep soulful love looks with interest.
Its when I'm out with you that makes me
Love you more.
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Re: Love Looks
6th Oct 2013 10:19pm
Giving hope to true love. Feeling good vibes from this Rose. Enjoyable read.
S:)
S:)
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7th Oct 2013 5:31am
Re: Love Looks
Anonymous
6th Oct 2013 10:24pm
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7th Oct 2013 5:34am
Yeah nothing to be said when he kisses holds and looks into your eyes if only brief it means everything
Re: Love Looks
Anonymous
6th Oct 2013 11:59pm
You and I should talk - it sounds like we are in the same place right now.
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7th Oct 2013 5:36am
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7th Oct 2013 00:34am
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7th Oct 2013 5:37am
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7th Oct 2013 1:26am
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7th Oct 2013 5:38am
Re: Love Looks
Anonymous
7th Oct 2013 5:17am
A kiss just to kiss, nothing more, nothing less, perfect sentiment!
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Re: Love Looks
7th Oct 2013 5:40am
Not all kisses need the urgency as if rolling within the bed
Some when out in public mean just as much
Thankyou Vee
Some when out in public mean just as much
Thankyou Vee
Re: Love Looks
Anonymous
7th Oct 2013 5:35pm
Beautiful! I love those kisses while we are just walking around Manhattan and waiting at a traffic light.
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