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The Outsider
I'm a creep and I'm a weirdo
they all say so
because I always have a book in my face
because I don’t have a girl around my arms all the time
because I'm black and I listen to "Metal".
I'm a creep and I'm a weirdo
they all say so
because I wear black all the time
because my hair is "odd by society's standards
because I don’t follow their rules
But know what I think?
I think they're the creeps
They are the ones afraid to be themselves
They are the ones who worships corporate Machines
They are the ones who life is controlled by what others think
But whatever
I'm a creep and I'm a weirdo
all the other weirdoes said so
they all say so
because I always have a book in my face
because I don’t have a girl around my arms all the time
because I'm black and I listen to "Metal".
I'm a creep and I'm a weirdo
they all say so
because I wear black all the time
because my hair is "odd by society's standards
because I don’t follow their rules
But know what I think?
I think they're the creeps
They are the ones afraid to be themselves
They are the ones who worships corporate Machines
They are the ones who life is controlled by what others think
But whatever
I'm a creep and I'm a weirdo
all the other weirdoes said so
Published 6th Oct 2013
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6th Oct 2013 3:43am
You have captured the thinking of the multitudes......
The older I get, the more I am able to have a "Fuck them"
Attitude while going about my way not doing what everyone else is doing....... :)
Loved the poem...
The older I get, the more I am able to have a "Fuck them"
Attitude while going about my way not doing what everyone else is doing....... :)
Loved the poem...
6th Oct 2013 5:38am
Thanks Scarlet for reading and sharing, yeah I wouldn't have been to write anything like this a few years ago , glad you liked it.
6th Oct 2013 3:51am
weirdo is a compliment as far as i'm concerned... creep, on the other hand, is tough to take any way but negatively.
2nd to the last verse rocks, btw.
2nd to the last verse rocks, btw.
6th Oct 2013 5:40am
Thanks for the compliment Zen, yeah it may be a little tough to take but I'm creepy and I'm proud...that came out a little wrong..
6th Oct 2013 5:56am
6th Oct 2013 6:17am
Ha! glad you liked it, fuck being normal the world would be too boring if we didn't few weirdoes.
17th Oct 2013 6:28pm
My friends think that me listening to rock (a.k.a white people's music,according to society lol) and when I was yonger I was afraid to admit it. But now,I simply don't give a damn. And when it comes to black and clothing, well let's just say that my mom complained about it a year ago haha. I told her that it suits me so she must just let me be.
A very relatable write, Red. I enjoyed reading it (:
A very relatable write, Red. I enjoyed reading it (:
18th Oct 2013 11:51pm
