deepundergroundpoetry.com
me
She fell from heaven
Wings ripped from her back
Halo crashed to the ground
Along with the million tears she has cried
On her knees in the desert sands
All alone no where to go
Only the stars to twinkle in her company
She cries one last tear stand makes her way to a new horizon
Wings ripped from her back
Halo crashed to the ground
Along with the million tears she has cried
On her knees in the desert sands
All alone no where to go
Only the stars to twinkle in her company
She cries one last tear stand makes her way to a new horizon
Published 5th Oct 2013
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 2
reading list entries 0
comments 4
reads 965
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Anonymous
5th Oct 2013 9:48pm
<< post removed >>
5th Oct 2013 10:26pm
Thank you for the wonderful comment and the picture thing was a pure accident that turned out well
9th Oct 2013 10:42am
ahh ...... I don't know what to say about this... coz the poem outside really was good I wanted check it out n I see a pic ..hmmm ..that's not done by everybody.. you are the first to do so in my DUO exploration so far ....
so keep it up
keep Rollin
cyanide....
so keep it up
keep Rollin
cyanide....
9th Nov 2013 12:27pm
Hello,
I like the theme very much but i think it lacks something. It lacks depth (not that it doesn't have any) but instead of writing what you're feeling, try to identify other ways of expressing your thoughts into paper.
I like the theme very much but i think it lacks something. It lacks depth (not that it doesn't have any) but instead of writing what you're feeling, try to identify other ways of expressing your thoughts into paper.
