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No early release here
Yes that's right
Watch as I impale myself
On you
Making the connection
Help yourself
To my goods
Displayed
Use your hands
Discover and play
As I spread mine within
Chest hair devine
You just concentrate on feeling
While I work
Up and way down on mine
I will let you run wild when I'm ready
Not before
My joy flows free
Only then will I release you
Let you out
Cry freedom baby
Cry out with me
Watch as I impale myself
On you
Making the connection
Help yourself
To my goods
Displayed
Use your hands
Discover and play
As I spread mine within
Chest hair devine
You just concentrate on feeling
While I work
Up and way down on mine
I will let you run wild when I'm ready
Not before
My joy flows free
Only then will I release you
Let you out
Cry freedom baby
Cry out with me
Published 5th Oct 2013
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5th Oct 2013 10:33am
Um Rose, I'm so surprised I'm the first one to comment... I think you conveyed a tragic feeling of attraction, and love/hate. Been there... God knows I've been there girl!
5th Oct 2013 11:00am
Thanks GBL comments always appreciated xD
Actually a loving act which I adore
But if you saw something different within the lines
Then I'm happy
:)
Actually a loving act which I adore
But if you saw something different within the lines
Then I'm happy
:)
5th Oct 2013 12:32pm
It's all about the control but done in a loving way. Liking the use of the word 'impale'. Enjoyable read.
S:)
S:)
5th Oct 2013 1:23pm
Yes sweets
Its a good thing to switch it around
Prefer slight submisive
That's just me.
But I do have my time too
My moment to shine bright
Controling his release
Till I am ready
Now thats control
With a loving mutual outcome
Yeah impaling
It's what it is
Oh heavenly moments
I miss
Its a good thing to switch it around
Prefer slight submisive
That's just me.
But I do have my time too
My moment to shine bright
Controling his release
Till I am ready
Now thats control
With a loving mutual outcome
Yeah impaling
It's what it is
Oh heavenly moments
I miss
Anonymous
5th Oct 2013 2:55pm
Give and take and everyone is rewarded in the end, perfectly executed!!
p.s i noticed how you slipped the chest hair in there lol
p.s i noticed how you slipped the chest hair in there lol
5th Oct 2013 3:03pm
man with chest hair
where do I sign?
simple haha
chest grabbing hair whoooa
love it!
yes agreed roles are there to be swapped around
when least expected too
oh the excitment of it!
where do I sign?
simple haha
chest grabbing hair whoooa
love it!
yes agreed roles are there to be swapped around
when least expected too
oh the excitment of it!
Anonymous
5th Oct 2013 6:19pm
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5th Oct 2013 6:42pm
Oh Theo :)
Just chest hair
Not I repeat. . Not on the back
Man desired not monkey
Just chest hair
Not I repeat. . Not on the back
Man desired not monkey
Anonymous
5th Oct 2013 6:49pm
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Anonymous
5th Oct 2013 7:06pm
Okay, Horse Whisperer set aside until people have time to get over this one. And ...Oh, yeah... chest hair
5th Oct 2013 7:45pm
Anonymous
7th Oct 2013 4:00pm
Rose,
Must be the time of season for mounting up and enjoying a nice long ride! LOL!!! Loved your line:
"You just concentrate on feeling
While I work
Up and way down on mine"
Now, there's a visual! ; )
Enjoyed!!!
tornado
Must be the time of season for mounting up and enjoying a nice long ride! LOL!!! Loved your line:
"You just concentrate on feeling
While I work
Up and way down on mine"
Now, there's a visual! ; )
Enjoyed!!!
tornado
7th Oct 2013 4:36pm
