apart

thanks theo,
Jaime

so true Jagracia! a simple single thought that says volumes about many things.. much liked!

thanks, I try to keep it simple...

Superb wordplay, Jaime,  
I like it very much!  
Apart from that -  
your thoughts are  
deep and provoking!
 
The painting also is
another wonderful piece  
from your collection.  
Thanks for showing!

a part of me wanted to stay apart
but now yearns to be reunited

That's indeed
a part of the
apart thing ...
It tears us apart.

It's a good thought, turned
into a really good poem, jag...

I'm lucky if I can turn any thought
into any poem...but thanks, p...

I envy you I have
stuff in my head
I just don't know
what to do with...
the words won't
fall right when I
most want them
to..:)

exactement,  c'est dommage...

You write such clarity with such brevity. Takes the breath away.

i like poems that can be
read in one breathe

ALL those countless, tiny pieces--craving reunification--to fulfill the feeling of completeness.....

(Perhaps, that is what is symbolic of love??? )

...seeking disentropy...