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If the Weather man says.. Repost
Do you remember that first time with me, had we kissed?
I remember taking off and handing over my knickers though;
Standing still as you remarked on the quality and feel before
wrapping them around your equipment erect, as you sat in the
armchair watching the television, Ordering me to raise my
skirts you did, as you whistled in appreciation, was made to
watch you as you played to a steady rhythm. Hearing the
weatherman speak along with your quickening pace, Seeing your
body go tense, watching as it flowed down and over what was
mine, soaking into the fabric as you wiped and cleaned, before
being told to put them back on and leave, your eyes glued to the
box. Picking up the payment from the dresser as I went my
way, feeling you against my skin with every step taken, before
closing the door behind me and stepping out.
The man from the box was right,
A wet and waaarm afternoon ahead..
I remember taking off and handing over my knickers though;
Standing still as you remarked on the quality and feel before
wrapping them around your equipment erect, as you sat in the
armchair watching the television, Ordering me to raise my
skirts you did, as you whistled in appreciation, was made to
watch you as you played to a steady rhythm. Hearing the
weatherman speak along with your quickening pace, Seeing your
body go tense, watching as it flowed down and over what was
mine, soaking into the fabric as you wiped and cleaned, before
being told to put them back on and leave, your eyes glued to the
box. Picking up the payment from the dresser as I went my
way, feeling you against my skin with every step taken, before
closing the door behind me and stepping out.
The man from the box was right,
A wet and waaarm afternoon ahead..
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4th Oct 2013 6:06pm
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Anonymous
4th Oct 2013 6:22pm
Rose,
Maybe I've been wrong about not watching the news....even the weather man has a 50/50 chance ; ) Enjoyed the nice even flow of this one ; )
tornado
Maybe I've been wrong about not watching the news....even the weather man has a 50/50 chance ; ) Enjoyed the nice even flow of this one ; )
tornado
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Anonymous
4th Oct 2013 9:03pm
How strangely and utterly erotic this sounds to me...
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re: Re: If the Weather man says.. Repost
4th Oct 2013 9:15pm
Thankyou petit ;)
Actually forgot I'd written it so reposted with slight edit
Actually forgot I'd written it so reposted with slight edit
Re: If the Weather man says.. Repost
4th Oct 2013 9:26pm
A lovely read [really well written] in my opinion. It was humorous too. Well Done !
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5th Oct 2013 1:30am
I like it when
people write it
like it is or
it was
but then I'm
biased
I'm a
fan..:)
people write it
like it is or
it was
but then I'm
biased
I'm a
fan..:)
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Re: If the Weather man says.. Repost
Anonymous
5th Oct 2013 6:00am
Rose the weatherman here aren't as accurate as they are there...maybe i should consider moving across the pond lol
btw at first glance at the title i thought the weatherman told you to repost lol
btw at first glance at the title i thought the weatherman told you to repost lol
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re: Re: If the Weather man says.. Repost
5th Oct 2013 6:09am
Yes the weather man told me :)
In my delicate head he tells me to do many things
Usually involves a joyous moment or two. .
Thank you for reading Vee
Means a lot xoxo
In my delicate head he tells me to do many things
Usually involves a joyous moment or two. .
Thank you for reading Vee
Means a lot xoxo
Re: If the Weather man says.. Repost
5th Oct 2013 4:46pm
Love this!Especially since you wore Him all the way home :)))
Verrrry nice ;)
Verrrry nice ;)
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Re: If the Weather man says.. Repost
5th Oct 2013 4:57pm
He was satisfied that was the important thing :)
Thankyou for reading softtoy
And for the add
Thankyou for reading softtoy
And for the add