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You Had Your Chance
Deep in my mind
Darkness forms my chains
Maniacal laughter pounds through these veins
Cut me open
Bleed me dry
But as you do
You better fucking pray I die
And if I don't
You better run
Because this laughter begets the greater sins
And I've ceased to care
If my darkness wins
Watch the blood stream from my eyes
Run in fear
As my inner demon cries
This battle now has just begun
You started the game
But face it filth I've already won
My warrior's soul
Won't let you win
What's that
Hiding in fear
What did you begin
My metamorphosis
From Jekyll to purest sin
Endure it till I let you die
I warned you what was caged inside
Darkness forms my chains
Maniacal laughter pounds through these veins
Cut me open
Bleed me dry
But as you do
You better fucking pray I die
And if I don't
You better run
Because this laughter begets the greater sins
And I've ceased to care
If my darkness wins
Watch the blood stream from my eyes
Run in fear
As my inner demon cries
This battle now has just begun
You started the game
But face it filth I've already won
My warrior's soul
Won't let you win
What's that
Hiding in fear
What did you begin
My metamorphosis
From Jekyll to purest sin
Endure it till I let you die
I warned you what was caged inside
Published 26th Sep 2013
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Anonymous
26th Sep 2013 11:11pm
Dark, powerful and dare to call it a good venting?
I like the fact that you're not shortchanging your reader with the powerful emotions behind the piece.
I like the fact that you're not shortchanging your reader with the powerful emotions behind the piece.
26th Sep 2013 11:18pm
Thanks Vee lol every once in a while you have to let some of the darkness out no matter how peaceful you are on the outside normally. this piece was brought about for HadesRising's competition but I liked it so much I decided to put it out there for my readers as well :)
26th Sep 2013 11:28pm
I'm feeling the same way...stupid girls and their boy stealing drama. I only wanted a simple, true relationship.
26th Sep 2013 11:30pm
27th Sep 2013 1:56am
Brilliant write. Very powerful.
I love this line "My metamorphosis From Jekyll to purest sin "
I love this line "My metamorphosis From Jekyll to purest sin "
27th Sep 2013 2:02am
Thank you taylor that line was actually a last second addition to be honest :)
27th Sep 2013 5:03am
Really deep and such powerful words
I enjoyed this one a lot, thank you for sharing
I enjoyed this one a lot, thank you for sharing
27th Sep 2013 8:22pm
Thank you for reading. Im always happy to see that people enjoy my work :)
Anonymous
27th Sep 2013 5:43am
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27th Sep 2013 8:22pm
Thanks again theo. No tree references this time sorry about that lol :p
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27th Sep 2013 10:06pm
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27th Sep 2013 10:35pm
27th Sep 2013 9:13pm
'What's that
Hiding in fear
What did you begin"
It's always after the ball is rolling hiding happens!!lol Great write--strong in emtion and succinct in intent!
Hiding in fear
What did you begin"
It's always after the ball is rolling hiding happens!!lol Great write--strong in emtion and succinct in intent!
27th Sep 2013 9:38pm
Thank you for your kind words :) and thanks for the read glad you liked it
