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Alone, Together
Alone you walked into the woods
through the deep forest green
past a great boulder
your footfalls fading away
Losing sight of you
I followed the beat of your heart
as you slowed down just enough
for me to catch up
through the deep forest green
past a great boulder
your footfalls fading away
Losing sight of you
I followed the beat of your heart
as you slowed down just enough
for me to catch up
Published 25th Sep 2013
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25th Sep 2013 4:53pm
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25th Sep 2013 5:18pm
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25th Sep 2013 7:03pm
When a heartbeat binds
so you're able to follow
someone blind
true passion's involved.
Lovely scene, J.!
so you're able to follow
someone blind
true passion's involved.
Lovely scene, J.!
25th Sep 2013 7:20pm
Wistful...tinged with melancholy...bittersweet
How two can be close, yet worlds apart--so touchingly haunting. <3
How two can be close, yet worlds apart--so touchingly haunting. <3
25th Sep 2013 8:06pm
i can see the wood
and the boulder as you
have them here and it's
a really nice piece, jag...
and the boulder as you
have them here and it's
a really nice piece, jag...
Anonymous
25th Sep 2013 8:22pm
This pulled at my heartstrings. Sweetly written!
Anonymous
26th Sep 2013 6:41pm
Very beautifully written
A good read
Kitty
A good read
Kitty
27th Sep 2013 3:29am
