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Ocean of You
all i need is your smile
to keep me alive
drinking in your happiness
drowning in your pleasure
swept away by your beauty
i drift in an ocean of you
no land in sight
just endless waves of Cynthia
lifting and dropping me
pushing me this way and that
washing over every inch of me
and while i slip
beneath your surface occasionally
i'm unafraid
to sink into you forever
would be paradise
to keep me alive
drinking in your happiness
drowning in your pleasure
swept away by your beauty
i drift in an ocean of you
no land in sight
just endless waves of Cynthia
lifting and dropping me
pushing me this way and that
washing over every inch of me
and while i slip
beneath your surface occasionally
i'm unafraid
to sink into you forever
would be paradise
Published 25th Sep 2013
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25th Sep 2013 4:10am
25th Sep 2013 4:11am
thank you very much! it helps that i'm currently very inspired by the person named in the poem...
25th Sep 2013 5:24am
25th Sep 2013 5:59am
Thank you! And thanks for the welcome. I've really missed being part of a creative community. I like the last stanza best too...
Anonymous
25th Sep 2013 8:58am
Your Sea of Cynthia sounds like a place of beauty and wonder. Terrific first entry. Welcome to DU!
26th Sep 2013 7:09am
thanks for the welcome, and yes, the sea is incredible. i could swim for days and never grow tired!
25th Sep 2013 12:36pm
26th Sep 2013 7:10am
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26th Sep 2013 3:17am
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26th Sep 2013 7:11am
thank you! it's so awesome when you're so in love with someone that you have to stretch for the right words to make them understand how big your emotions are...
