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leaves strewn across the grass
at the mercy of the wind
they are not the only ones
Written by
jagracia
Published
24th Sep 2013
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Anonymous
24th Sep 2013 8:02pm
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dartford
(Paul S...)
24th Sep 2013 8:52pm
great image, with gust
o! nice poem, jag...
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DarkEnchantress
24th Sep 2013 9:12pm
Pieces..remnants... the scattered leaves across the lawn...
Perhaps symbolic of a relationship(a love) so abruptly, unavoidably brought to an end.....
(As leaves before the wind)
Enjoyed, but fills me with a wistful sadness. <3
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catlady
24th Sep 2013 9:41pm
We are all at the mercy of the wind-well said !
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flowergirl
25th Sep 2013 4:44am
Our souls are at times blown by the uncontrollable force. Nice! :)
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Anonymous
25th Sep 2013 5:01am
Winds of change - not always a bad thing...
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Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
25th Sep 2013 8:09pm
Sometimes it's like that, we're exposed to the force of the elements and can only play along. Good one!
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synthetic1
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28th Sep 2013 3:18pm
Beautifully poignant. Every word counts and leads somewhere lovely if a tad sad.... Thanks syn
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