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Anonymous
24th Sep 2013 8:02pm
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24th Sep 2013 8:52pm
24th Sep 2013 9:12pm
Pieces..remnants... the scattered leaves across the lawn...
Perhaps symbolic of a relationship(a love) so abruptly, unavoidably brought to an end.....
(As leaves before the wind)
Enjoyed, but fills me with a wistful sadness. <3
Perhaps symbolic of a relationship(a love) so abruptly, unavoidably brought to an end.....
(As leaves before the wind)
Enjoyed, but fills me with a wistful sadness. <3
24th Sep 2013 9:41pm
Anonymous
25th Sep 2013 4:44am
Our souls are at times blown by the uncontrollable force. Nice! :)
Anonymous
25th Sep 2013 5:01am
Winds of change - not always a bad thing...
25th Sep 2013 8:09pm
Sometimes it's like that, we're exposed to the force of the elements and can only play along. Good one!
28th Sep 2013 3:18pm
Beautifully poignant. Every word counts and leads somewhere lovely if a tad sad.... Thanks syn
