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So Then , What's The Deal
I ask of you
whatever it is , out there
please come through
with wisdom , knowledge
to share
for I , could do
with a little bit of fair
play from you
that's if you really
do care
What am I to you
have you lived , died
a life too
what is it like
and will I be , alright
'cause I could do
with a little bit of insight
or am I just screwed
because I didn't
choose , astute
are my chances few
of ever getting the light
why is gambling taboo
if all the odds
don't even up right
why is there
a dark downstairs
where
everyone is scared
if you created
the fallen one
well , why is he still there
is it to create more
problems
or a threat to to take us there
if we don't take worship
of you
or dare to , not care .
There's a lot
that's here
that's not enlightening
why would a god
use fear
if he's so full of loving
and never appear
to show us
that he's really something
can you
make it more clear
as I need to know
the deal .
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