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The Journey to Sovereignty
Walking on the twisted path between the trees, I stumbled in the darkness
Down on my soil covered knees, I looked up to see again the petrifying glow of your eyes
Aided by the moon’s sorrowful light, I was able to see your silhouette
Your look penetrated austerely, allowing me to again view the slow process of my own demise
Pleading to break free from your vindictive grasp
So desperately, I wish to be forsaken, for you have secured me for so long
Wearing the collar of shame and guided by the leash of detriment
I am bound to do your will, though I yearn in my life for sovereignty to belong
Enlightenment precipitously flooded the plains of my mind
Giving me the strength I needed to leave you and evade the further pain I would have received
I have awaken to realize my route and it does not lie with you
Our spirits are not one, for our paths are no longer interweaved
Removing the chain that you leashed me with so long ago
I am following not the beaten trail that you monitor, but crafting a new one that you will never travel
Relieving myself of the collar you adorned on me when I was blind
I want it to be forever gone; to appear as if you were never present and that this was not my battle
To reach my destination, I have to destroy what prevents my progression
I have to break the hold this demon has on me
You are the foul creature that warms a way in with tender kindness, but kills with no remorse
I have to obliterate you, so I will never be in the shadows again; so I can see
I know this needs a few things done to it, so I will revise it later when I have time.
Down on my soil covered knees, I looked up to see again the petrifying glow of your eyes
Aided by the moon’s sorrowful light, I was able to see your silhouette
Your look penetrated austerely, allowing me to again view the slow process of my own demise
Pleading to break free from your vindictive grasp
So desperately, I wish to be forsaken, for you have secured me for so long
Wearing the collar of shame and guided by the leash of detriment
I am bound to do your will, though I yearn in my life for sovereignty to belong
Enlightenment precipitously flooded the plains of my mind
Giving me the strength I needed to leave you and evade the further pain I would have received
I have awaken to realize my route and it does not lie with you
Our spirits are not one, for our paths are no longer interweaved
Removing the chain that you leashed me with so long ago
I am following not the beaten trail that you monitor, but crafting a new one that you will never travel
Relieving myself of the collar you adorned on me when I was blind
I want it to be forever gone; to appear as if you were never present and that this was not my battle
To reach my destination, I have to destroy what prevents my progression
I have to break the hold this demon has on me
You are the foul creature that warms a way in with tender kindness, but kills with no remorse
I have to obliterate you, so I will never be in the shadows again; so I can see
I know this needs a few things done to it, so I will revise it later when I have time.
Published 22nd Sep 2013
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22nd Sep 2013 10:03am
Oh Jess! This is just absolutely phenomenal!
There is no denying your gift of words! This was weaved together beautifully!
"Enlightenment precipitously flooded the plains of my mind
Giving me the strength I needed to leave you and evade the further pain I would have received
I have awaken to realize my route and it does not lie with you
Our spirits are not one, for our paths are no longer interweaved"<--WHEW!
Love! Love! Love! Xo
There is no denying your gift of words! This was weaved together beautifully!
"Enlightenment precipitously flooded the plains of my mind
Giving me the strength I needed to leave you and evade the further pain I would have received
I have awaken to realize my route and it does not lie with you
Our spirits are not one, for our paths are no longer interweaved"<--WHEW!
Love! Love! Love! Xo
22nd Sep 2013 5:14pm
Awe! Thank you, Rain! I just love receiving your comments! They are always just so wonderful. I am so glad you enjoyed it.
It has been a while since I have written anything, so I am happy that I got a chance to write one as well as post it on here.
Merry Cheers!!!
It has been a while since I have written anything, so I am happy that I got a chance to write one as well as post it on here.
Merry Cheers!!!
22nd Sep 2013 8:43pm
Outstanding work of idependence. It has been a while since I have read something new from you and I am glad to see you are breaking free of the chains that bind. JJ
26th Oct 2013 7:01am
4th Nov 2013 2:49am
Why thank you so much! It is nice to hear that you enjoyed it so. I appreciate both the read and comment.
Hope all is well and
Merry Cheers!!!
Hope all is well and
Merry Cheers!!!
15th Mar 2014 6:43am
15th Mar 2014 11:22pm
Thank you so much for the comment. It has been so long since I have posted anything new on here, so it is nice to get a comment despite that.
I am glad you enjoyed this.
Hope all is well and
Merry Cheers!!!
I am glad you enjoyed this.
Hope all is well and
Merry Cheers!!!
16th Jan 2015 3:17am
Beautiful write.. really a fan of your work.. your imagery, is simply amazing.. thanks for sharing..
Dave
Dave
16th Jan 2015 3:38am
A fan?! Now I am flattered. Immensely. Thank you so very very much.
Hope all is well.
May Mother Earth guide and let the elements be with you.
Merry Cheers!!!
Hope all is well.
May Mother Earth guide and let the elements be with you.
Merry Cheers!!!
