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one lover + one romantic = uncertainty
the sun only stayed out so long
before father night beckoned him home
I stayed out with you laying on wet grass
trying to count the stars in the milky way
clouds passed over head so we always lost count
I tried impressing you so many times, so many ways
it didn't matter that you liked me, you liked many others
had it been any other circumstance would our guilt exist?
rag time music in the distance barely reached our ears
and I tried talking of the creation of man
but you read many variations so it seemed a dry topic
panicking, I could only think of the blanket we sat on
so I mentioned how cold i was because the water soaked through
then you moved closer, I smiled, and put my arms around you
you said, "the songs the crickets make is so beautiful."
what a redundant comment
booze ran through my veins but were beginning to wear off
I had a headache but said nothing, periodically closing my eyes
people you love are affirmed when you may sit with them silently
we sat saying nothing for quite a while, eyes closed, lost in nothingness
blackness behind my eyelids glowed warm, green, yellow, purple...
breaking silence, we described what these colored shapes resembled
you saw an elephant, flower, cat, baby, tree, and two men running
then you leaned over to kiss me and I said, "all I see is colored smoke "
before father night beckoned him home
I stayed out with you laying on wet grass
trying to count the stars in the milky way
clouds passed over head so we always lost count
I tried impressing you so many times, so many ways
it didn't matter that you liked me, you liked many others
had it been any other circumstance would our guilt exist?
rag time music in the distance barely reached our ears
and I tried talking of the creation of man
but you read many variations so it seemed a dry topic
panicking, I could only think of the blanket we sat on
so I mentioned how cold i was because the water soaked through
then you moved closer, I smiled, and put my arms around you
you said, "the songs the crickets make is so beautiful."
what a redundant comment
booze ran through my veins but were beginning to wear off
I had a headache but said nothing, periodically closing my eyes
people you love are affirmed when you may sit with them silently
we sat saying nothing for quite a while, eyes closed, lost in nothingness
blackness behind my eyelids glowed warm, green, yellow, purple...
breaking silence, we described what these colored shapes resembled
you saw an elephant, flower, cat, baby, tree, and two men running
then you leaned over to kiss me and I said, "all I see is colored smoke "
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