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The Murder Game
You think that you know me,
but honestly you don't.
You say you will hurt me,
I suggest you don't.
Because surprise, I have a secret.
It's one you'd like to know.
Maybe if you hear it,
I'll get left alone.
I have a couple friends,
that live in my brain.
Please it's not funny,
They drive me insane.
When they want me,
I beckon at their call.
Though the doc tries to tell me,
They're not real at all.
Regardless of the shrink,
I'm always itching to kill.
So please don't test me,
because honestly I will.
You say I'm not evil,
That I'm all bark, but no bite.
Let's see if you can go home,
to your loving family tonight.
I'm sorry to say you won't,
That just the honest truth.
I know it seems unfair,
unjust and uncouth.
I told you my patience was thin,
going, going, gone.
Now I sing of murder and death.
My very favorite song.
So my dear friends,
The ones in brain.
Do you challenge me again,
To play the Murder Game?
but honestly you don't.
You say you will hurt me,
I suggest you don't.
Because surprise, I have a secret.
It's one you'd like to know.
Maybe if you hear it,
I'll get left alone.
I have a couple friends,
that live in my brain.
Please it's not funny,
They drive me insane.
When they want me,
I beckon at their call.
Though the doc tries to tell me,
They're not real at all.
Regardless of the shrink,
I'm always itching to kill.
So please don't test me,
because honestly I will.
You say I'm not evil,
That I'm all bark, but no bite.
Let's see if you can go home,
to your loving family tonight.
I'm sorry to say you won't,
That just the honest truth.
I know it seems unfair,
unjust and uncouth.
I told you my patience was thin,
going, going, gone.
Now I sing of murder and death.
My very favorite song.
So my dear friends,
The ones in brain.
Do you challenge me again,
To play the Murder Game?
Written by
dangerousdesires
(TheVoicesAreWatching)
Published 19th Sep 2013
| Edited 24th Sep 2013
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Re: The Murder Game
20th Sep 2013 1:30pm
I absolutely love this poem. Such amazing word usage and heartache really shows through. It's remarkable how someone could convey such emotions into poetry. Dont ever stop writing
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20th Sep 2013 5:23pm
This comment brought tears to my eyes:) Thank You very much^_^ My poetry is a lot like me, emotional:P
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21st Sep 2013 10:33pm
my brain friends want me to ask your brain friends if they can have a play date. I said it is fine with me if it is fine with you.
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13th Dec 2013 6:48pm
sorry, I have been busy and not had time for this extra curricular, but I hope to be able to get on here a lot more for a few weeks at least, so let the mind games begin!
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16th Jan 2014 5:09am
thanks. i feel like i had a better one when i wrote the first part, but i forgot it and that was the best i could do on the spot.
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Re. The Murder Game
Radiohead
What's your frequency Kenneth? - REM
Machine head - Bush
Guano Apes -open your eyes
"Beat the machine that works in your head"
The list goes on and on
What's your frequency Kenneth? - REM
Machine head - Bush
Guano Apes -open your eyes
"Beat the machine that works in your head"
The list goes on and on
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24th Jun 2018 9:18am
I'm unfamiliar with the songs your quoting. Please enlighten me Comrade