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Lessons in Love
Why aren't there lessons in love
Squeezed in between maths and art
Why isn't there a book to look up the
sympton we have, Google it even and
Make the choices from those we have
been taught or from the unquestionable
Internet.
But no no no
Love and relationship it appears, leaves us
Stranded to make our own way.
Yes we can look at other people, those that
have gone before, trying not to fall in the holes
they created along the way.
But no no no.
We are all different. .well not when two colide
With the same questions and answers to create
The love affect.
Isn't that what loves about?
two people with two similar views
About how they feel about the other
We can study and look up all the days long
But it's about how we feel inside
It's about patience and understanding
Forward thinking
The start of love is never found in our
Comfort zone
Have to go grab it and nurture, make
It grow.
Squeezed in between maths and art
Why isn't there a book to look up the
sympton we have, Google it even and
Make the choices from those we have
been taught or from the unquestionable
Internet.
But no no no
Love and relationship it appears, leaves us
Stranded to make our own way.
Yes we can look at other people, those that
have gone before, trying not to fall in the holes
they created along the way.
But no no no.
We are all different. .well not when two colide
With the same questions and answers to create
The love affect.
Isn't that what loves about?
two people with two similar views
About how they feel about the other
We can study and look up all the days long
But it's about how we feel inside
It's about patience and understanding
Forward thinking
The start of love is never found in our
Comfort zone
Have to go grab it and nurture, make
It grow.
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Re: Lessons in Love
Anonymous
16th Sep 2013 6:04am
So true. The only learning is each other...
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Re: Lessons in Love
Anonymous
16th Sep 2013 6:05am
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Re: Lessons in Love
16th Sep 2013 6:15am
Wish there were lessons for love !!! But truly said, we nourish love with important ingredients of understanding, trust, care etc.
Beautifully crafted :)
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re: Re: Lessons in Love
16th Sep 2013 6:18am
Thank you brinda
Kinda un edited rushed
But the message is clear
So I'll leave the poem as it is :)
Kinda un edited rushed
But the message is clear
So I'll leave the poem as it is :)
Re: Lessons in Love
16th Sep 2013 6:16am
Thank you both of you xD
I didn't sit and ponder so much on this one
But liked how it came out
Everyone is unique
Can't study how others achieved or failed
Love is unique
Hits every one differently
I didn't sit and ponder so much on this one
But liked how it came out
Everyone is unique
Can't study how others achieved or failed
Love is unique
Hits every one differently
Re: Lessons in Love
16th Sep 2013 6:42am
It's about patience and understanding
Forward thinking
The start of love is never found in our
Comfort zone
Have to go grab it and nurture, make
It grow.
This part reads great ... True love and happiness comes with pain
LSP
Forward thinking
The start of love is never found in our
Comfort zone
Have to go grab it and nurture, make
It grow.
This part reads great ... True love and happiness comes with pain
LSP
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Re: Lessons in Love
16th Sep 2013 6:45am
Re: Lessons in Love
16th Sep 2013 9:25am
Mind you, if they'd taught it
in school I may actually
have done my homework..:)
in school I may actually
have done my homework..:)
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Re: Lessons in Love
Anonymous
16th Sep 2013 2:32pm
Always evolving, changing, growing, learning and the willingness to do all that.
nobody said it would be easy.
Lovely, thoughtful scribe :)
nobody said it would be easy.
Lovely, thoughtful scribe :)
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re: Re: Lessons in Love
16th Sep 2013 2:35pm
Re: Lessons in Love
16th Sep 2013 2:33pm
homework?
ahh i was too busy with boys and bike sheds..well boys mainly behind the bi..oh you get my meaning..
ahh i was too busy with boys and bike sheds..well boys mainly behind the bi..oh you get my meaning..
Re: Lessons in Love
17th Sep 2013 7:20am
The love effect* >.<
Otherwise an effective observation on the unspoken nuance of affection and relation.
Otherwise an effective observation on the unspoken nuance of affection and relation.
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Re: Lessons in Love
17th Sep 2013 7:29am
Re: Lessons in Love
10th Oct 2013 4:36am
I wish I had your poems as a guide throughout my love life. Doesn't work that way, though, I know this...we all must learn the hard way sometimes. "The start of love is never found in our Comfort Zone"...wiser words on the subject are hard to find. As I read your works, I learn new things about love...more importantly, I am reminded of things I already knew, but failed to acknowledge at the time. It is a slow & torturous process for many of us. This is both soft & sharp. Forward thinking is on my agenda. I was told you could offer some creative wisdom, Rose. I am not disappointed. Thank you.
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re: Re: Lessons in Love
10th Oct 2013 5:30am
Thankyou for the wonderful commenting
Indeed you have made a great effort
Im glad I could help you through my poetry
Indeed you have made a great effort
Im glad I could help you through my poetry