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Sleep well
Sleep on your back so I might study you further.
Working out why you move so beautifully.
Are you dreaming of me, of what happened a
little while ago?
Another hour is all I can wait for;
So sleep well my man and let me have this moment,
with you, on my own;
Breathing you in so might remember always the night you came.
Working out why you move so beautifully.
Are you dreaming of me, of what happened a
little while ago?
Another hour is all I can wait for;
So sleep well my man and let me have this moment,
with you, on my own;
Breathing you in so might remember always the night you came.
Published 15th Sep 2013
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Anonymous
15th Sep 2013 4:59pm
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15th Sep 2013 5:43pm
aww tnx Theo, it means a lot
just because i write it dont mean i'm living it
but thank you truly xD
just because i write it dont mean i'm living it
but thank you truly xD
Anonymous
15th Sep 2013 5:35pm
The ending...is it literally or figuratively? just asking...:)
Lovely quiet piece, well done again my dear Lookaway.
Lovely quiet piece, well done again my dear Lookaway.
literally or figuratively
i would air on the side of literally
but its how the reader see's it, everyone see's things diff.
i see it as they had a wonderful night together and she's reflecting on what has passed before she has to go.
i would air on the side of literally
but its how the reader see's it, everyone see's things diff.
i see it as they had a wonderful night together and she's reflecting on what has passed before she has to go.
15th Sep 2013 10:02pm
Anonymous
15th Sep 2013 11:07pm
This made me want to weep. I want this intimacy, this closeness so much.
16th Sep 2013 00:31am
I was hooked with the first line ... I love watching mi brujita sleep
LSP
LSP
