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Brief the while I knew her
Brief, the while I knew her
Soft spoken on the couch
Full of hope the pair
A garden their delight.
I heard the news,
A silent bar ,the beer flat.
John was now alone,
First since he was twenty.
His birthday last week,
Sixty years they say.
The church was full
‘And did those feet’ rang out,
The bow carried by us all.
Buried well in England's
Green and pleasant land,
The richer for her memory.
Soft spoken on the couch
Full of hope the pair
A garden their delight.
I heard the news,
A silent bar ,the beer flat.
John was now alone,
First since he was twenty.
His birthday last week,
Sixty years they say.
The church was full
‘And did those feet’ rang out,
The bow carried by us all.
Buried well in England's
Green and pleasant land,
The richer for her memory.
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Re: Brief the while I knew her
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15th Sep 2013 11:54am
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15th Sep 2013 12:00pm
Re: Brief the while I knew her
15th Sep 2013 1:34pm
Always a delight to read from you
Amazing talent
So vivid in its creation
You have the gift
Amazing talent
So vivid in its creation
You have the gift
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15th Sep 2013 1:37pm
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Re: Brief the while I knew her
Anonymous
15th Sep 2013 5:41pm
Touching and heartfelt.
A loss makes us pause and think how fragile life, it really is.
Well penned :)
A loss makes us pause and think how fragile life, it really is.
Well penned :)
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Re: Brief the while I knew her
15th Sep 2013 5:57pm
Hi Ms Vee
I gave the poem to John you are right life is fragile,none realise this more than the wild animals who rarely fight to the death as humankind.
I gave the poem to John you are right life is fragile,none realise this more than the wild animals who rarely fight to the death as humankind.
Re: Brief the while I knew her
Anonymous
16th Sep 2013 8:25am
I really like this poem,Kexby, although I havent quite figured it out, that is the most fascinating thing about this write, when it ends it just re reads itself again....
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16th Sep 2013 9:02am
Re: Brief the while I knew her
21st Sep 2013 5:31pm
I love how you mix contemporary with traditional vibes. Another grand write. Tyvm syn
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22nd Sep 2013 8:47am