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Lay Me Down
Lay me down to sleep
Ignore the way I weep
And when you realize that I'm dead
Don't let the pain go to your head
Remember how I used to be
Or better yet forget all about me
Don't let me cross your mind
Don't remember when I was kind
For get the way I kissed
And let it be said "She won't be missed"
Just burn my body and bury the ash
Save yourself from wasting your first love; Cash
I know you will forget all about me
As soon as the life leaves this pale, scared body
Ignore the way I weep
And when you realize that I'm dead
Don't let the pain go to your head
Remember how I used to be
Or better yet forget all about me
Don't let me cross your mind
Don't remember when I was kind
For get the way I kissed
And let it be said "She won't be missed"
Just burn my body and bury the ash
Save yourself from wasting your first love; Cash
I know you will forget all about me
As soon as the life leaves this pale, scared body
Published 13th Sep 2013
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13th Sep 2013 5:52am
13th Sep 2013 1:07pm
Man, really great write... your first love cash, good line, strong statement there my friend... This is really good, deep, an intimate while still dark an shattering, well done friend...
14th Sep 2013 6:09am
Like the flow, the subject is a bit dark,
n self loathing... I understanding the feelings but always try to remember you are unique n whom ever
you have in your life is lucky to know you :)
n self loathing... I understanding the feelings but always try to remember you are unique n whom ever
you have in your life is lucky to know you :)
14th Sep 2013 10:23am
14th Sep 2013 12:51pm
