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-Enkindle thee-
Let our bodies become scorched
from the torch of our flames
Released from fiery fingertips
Igniting parched skin
that burns of yen
-Craze and sweltering colliding-
against tantalizing flesh
Combusting into ashes of We
slow burning like coals overnight
Together we cremate us
Urn us
from heated passion
Let our bodies become scorched
from the torch of our flames
Released from fiery fingertips
Igniting parched skin
that burns of yen
-Craze and sweltering colliding-
against tantalizing flesh
Combusting into ashes of We
slow burning like coals overnight
Together we cremate us
Urn us
from heated passion
Published 10th Sep 2013
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Anonymous
10th Sep 2013 10:48pm
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10th Sep 2013 10:49pm
Anonymous
- Edited 10th Sep 2013 11:47pm
10th Sep 2013 11:45pm
Brilliant wording & imagery. Enjoyed the read a lot! Welcome to DUP. :-)
Peace
Carlene
Peace
Carlene
Anonymous
12th Sep 2013 2:39am
This is what I call an on fire write. Sexy!!!! :)
13th Sep 2013 4:50am
15th Sep 2013 9:19am
lovers immolated by their own passion, I still bear the scars. you sizzle...
16th Sep 2013 1:10am
Anonymous
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16th Sep 2013 5:42am
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17th Sep 2013 8:07pm
17th Sep 2013 8:06pm
What strikes me here is the concept of a self-contained unit. All that is needed or desired is found within each other's space.
17th Sep 2013 8:08pm
17th Sep 2013 8:11pm
17th Oct 2013 4:28am
slow burning like coals overnight ...
beautiful...you have a weird (in a good way) and intriguing way to depict passion! ;)
beautiful...you have a weird (in a good way) and intriguing way to depict passion! ;)
