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Elizabeth Bathory- A Short Summary
The Blood Countess
Countess Elizabeth Báthory de Ecsed,
born 1560 as a countess of nobility,
in the Kingdom of Hungary.
Married at age 14,
to a son in aristocracy.
She was labelled
the most prolific female serial killer.
Bathing in the blood of over 650 girls
to make her self look younger.
She would slit there necks,
and drain their blood.
Then after gathering the crimson tears,
she submerged herself into the liquid tub.
She was a sick, depraved woman.
She did all this because she couldn't stand seeing herself get old
She'd slowly torture these little girls.
With no emotion. Her heart ice cold
When that blood,
proved to be insufficient.
She search for girls
from families more higher in proficients.
She would tell the families
that the girls would be educated,
but when the families heard the truth,
the girl were already dead, by then.
Due to her status,
she wasn't arrest or convicted.
Until she lost her grip,
and alive left a victim.
She was imprisoned by her own family
because of that one witness.
And even after her death in 1614,
The legend proved her to be the blood countess.
Countess Elizabeth Báthory de Ecsed,
born 1560 as a countess of nobility,
in the Kingdom of Hungary.
Married at age 14,
to a son in aristocracy.
She was labelled
the most prolific female serial killer.
Bathing in the blood of over 650 girls
to make her self look younger.
She would slit there necks,
and drain their blood.
Then after gathering the crimson tears,
she submerged herself into the liquid tub.
She was a sick, depraved woman.
She did all this because she couldn't stand seeing herself get old
She'd slowly torture these little girls.
With no emotion. Her heart ice cold
When that blood,
proved to be insufficient.
She search for girls
from families more higher in proficients.
She would tell the families
that the girls would be educated,
but when the families heard the truth,
the girl were already dead, by then.
Due to her status,
she wasn't arrest or convicted.
Until she lost her grip,
and alive left a victim.
She was imprisoned by her own family
because of that one witness.
And even after her death in 1614,
The legend proved her to be the blood countess.
Published 10th Sep 2013
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10th Sep 2013 5:50am
Hello friend; oh yeah, remember readin up on her, was in my eyes, one evil crazy real life vampire chick... One of the real ones in my eyes... You give any thought on writin further on her, into a story, fantasy, would be scarier in Spanish also, if ya did do that... Right on chica, dig this, an the subject, well done... deadwolf/Eddie
10th Sep 2013 6:00am
uuhh... You give me an Idea... I'd definitely want to write this into spanish. jeje
and I agree... She was definitely a sick woman... ugh... jeje...
But I just love the history
and I agree... She was definitely a sick woman... ugh... jeje...
But I just love the history
10th Sep 2013 7:16am
love it. i was planning another Bathory poem to go along with my trilogy but I think I've taken it as far I can go. It's great to see someone else to take up the reins. Well done.
12th Sep 2013 00:41am
Thank You very much!!
I love the Bathory History... it just tells how cynic this woman really is.
I might write another for a follow up since this piece was just a short summary.
I love the Bathory History... it just tells how cynic this woman really is.
I might write another for a follow up since this piece was just a short summary.
