I wish to know you

These words are wonderful.

"she was voiceless in her nest
mistaken by stillness in night  
her words wore glory timeless "

My favorite part.

ohh,
thankyou dear.
Much appreciated:)

Gabby,your comment lingers long for some time,
always a delighted to read those thankyou:)
Muah;)

Speaks volumes Rakhi. Well written.

OMG!Mags thankyou for getting deep into it.You read it what i meant:)

lovely write rakhi...great flow wanting to know somebody....

strider

Thankyou Strider..yeah fortunately:)

I feel like this could be an excerpt from an epic story. My favorite part "Escaping slaved fires
she was voiceless in her nest
mistaken by stillness in night  
her words wore glory timeless" The mystery of this person is captivating with the vivid detail you've used. Wondrous work Rakhi :)  

I love your comments,you really dig into my pieces,
Thankyou:)

I do my best to get as much of a poem especially yours since I enjoy reading them.
You're welcome :)

 especially mine,:))

Yup! Write on Rakhi :))

beautiful!
how was the sip of slipped time?

Achingly beautiful;)