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The Dance~
He tip toed in her heart
slow danced in her mind
held her body close to his
with silent brown eyes
she could see herself in him
his soul carried her feet
across the earth gently
never letting her out of reach
her coconut scented skin
rest on him in shiny patches
while he kissed every part of her
sensual thoughts speak as one
his hand on her waist she spins
he inhales her with each twist
holding her closer than ever
she carried him through her passage
slow danced in her mind
held her body close to his
with silent brown eyes
she could see herself in him
his soul carried her feet
across the earth gently
never letting her out of reach
her coconut scented skin
rest on him in shiny patches
while he kissed every part of her
sensual thoughts speak as one
his hand on her waist she spins
he inhales her with each twist
holding her closer than ever
she carried him through her passage
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8th Sep 2013 5:59am
Tommie, this is a wonderful fantasy! The first stanza transported me to an elegant ball room with only one couple dancing in the spot light :)
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9th Sep 2013 12:29pm
his soul carried her feet
across the earth gently
Nice vision you have painted Tommie, rocking it as always sweetheart, thanks for sharing.
across the earth gently
Nice vision you have painted Tommie, rocking it as always sweetheart, thanks for sharing.
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Anonymous
9th Sep 2013 3:48pm
some dance write tl!
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