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Hurtbeat
Damn baby
I wish I didnt have to be away from you
At such a distance while your mind breaks
And your body shakes
At stakes seemingly higher than the value
Of your inconquorable soul
Your pain is mine
Im feeling your hurtbeat
Fuck this phone that seperates me from your
Cracked tone of voice
And the signal that keeps breaking us up
And getting us back together
I hold your voice closer to my ear
In fear that I wont be able to save you in time
Please dont go yet
Im crying with you but you dont know it
Im feeling your hurtbeat
I'm not hanging up untill you fall asleep
I'm right here
Here for you to cuss and swear and yell and scream at
I dont care if its 4am
I dont care if you woke me up
I dont care if you dont want to ramble on about
Whats pushing the blade into your heart most
Just breath me
I'll be here untill your hurt stops beating
I wish I didnt have to be away from you
At such a distance while your mind breaks
And your body shakes
At stakes seemingly higher than the value
Of your inconquorable soul
Your pain is mine
Im feeling your hurtbeat
Fuck this phone that seperates me from your
Cracked tone of voice
And the signal that keeps breaking us up
And getting us back together
I hold your voice closer to my ear
In fear that I wont be able to save you in time
Please dont go yet
Im crying with you but you dont know it
Im feeling your hurtbeat
I'm not hanging up untill you fall asleep
I'm right here
Here for you to cuss and swear and yell and scream at
I dont care if its 4am
I dont care if you woke me up
I dont care if you dont want to ramble on about
Whats pushing the blade into your heart most
Just breath me
I'll be here untill your hurt stops beating
Published 7th Sep 2013
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Anonymous
7th Sep 2013 6:41pm
felt it strongly in your words zacc
nicely done poet
strider...
nicely done poet
strider...
7th Sep 2013 7:11pm
Im so excited after reading this,
To know that im not the only person to feel like this about a personal situation - thank you
To know that im not the only person to feel like this about a personal situation - thank you
7th Sep 2013 8:58pm
7th Sep 2013 8:59pm
Always welcome T.T :-) Thankyou for reading and I'm glad I could get you to relate personally...
9th Sep 2013 3:18pm
10th Sep 2013 7:43am
this is an awesome poem I can relate differently for I push the blade in my own heart instead
12th Sep 2013 9:24am
12th Sep 2013 9:25am
16th Sep 2013 00:15am
Really like your writing voice and can really identify with the sentiments too. Good luck.
16th Sep 2013 1:50am
22nd Sep 2013 2:30am
Fuck this phone that seperates me from your // Cracked tone of voice // And the signal that keeps breaking us up // And getting us back together
I like how you personified the phone's connection/signal to that of your relationship
I like how you personified the phone's connection/signal to that of your relationship
22nd Sep 2013 2:37am
