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Spent Together~
A thousand poems I
could write,
All about how he looks
as he sits there,
Looking the way he does
just like that,
Each word forming a
story,
Making me hungry for
his distraction,
I imagine being torn to
pieces by him,
Adding my marks to
paper,
Every letter is a tight fit
like I am to him,
My ink soaks into the
parchment,
My poem wrapped around
him beautifully
could write,
All about how he looks
as he sits there,
Looking the way he does
just like that,
Each word forming a
story,
Making me hungry for
his distraction,
I imagine being torn to
pieces by him,
Adding my marks to
paper,
Every letter is a tight fit
like I am to him,
My ink soaks into the
parchment,
My poem wrapped around
him beautifully
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Re: Spent Together~
6th Sep 2013 1:03pm
I imagine being torn to
pieces by him : So lovely !!
Beautiful ink !!! Enjoyed :)
pieces by him : So lovely !!
Beautiful ink !!! Enjoyed :)
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Anonymous
6th Sep 2013 2:18pm
I love it. Vivid, metaphorical, and you got your message across :)
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Anonymous
6th Sep 2013 2:27pm
nice with your words here tl!
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Anonymous
6th Sep 2013 3:31pm
Tommie,
What a beautiful distraction to be wrapped in!
tornado
What a beautiful distraction to be wrapped in!
tornado
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6th Sep 2013 3:43pm
I really enjoy this piece. I love the sensual power you ascribe to words..."Each word forming a story" very nice Tommie :)
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