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'NESS'
Arising out of horniness
(Sometimes known as ‘randiness’),
Manliness knows loveliness,
Pursued with both gentleness
And a lusty liveliness.
After first-time awkwardness
They mature to thoroughness,
Moments of great sacredness
And intimate preciousness,
In shared state of nakedness,
Lightening heart heaviness,
Expressing their faithfulness.
(Sometimes known as ‘randiness’),
Manliness knows loveliness,
Pursued with both gentleness
And a lusty liveliness.
After first-time awkwardness
They mature to thoroughness,
Moments of great sacredness
And intimate preciousness,
In shared state of nakedness,
Lightening heart heaviness,
Expressing their faithfulness.
Published 4th Sep 2013
| Edited 5th Sep 2013
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Anonymous
4th Sep 2013 9:16pm
Solomon_Song,
Oooo! And don't forget Drunkenness that leads us into Temptationess ; ) That's a whole lot of ness going on, maybe you could have subtitled it Elliot? Enjoyed your "lusty liveliness" line.
tornado
Oooo! And don't forget Drunkenness that leads us into Temptationess ; ) That's a whole lot of ness going on, maybe you could have subtitled it Elliot? Enjoyed your "lusty liveliness" line.
tornado
Anonymous
- Edited 4th Sep 2013 9:33pm
4th Sep 2013 9:32pm
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Anonymous
4th Sep 2013 10:00pm
That's a lot of ness and well done with such cheekiness solomon!
strider
strider
4th Sep 2013 10:07pm
5th Sep 2013 00:27am
Anonymous
5th Sep 2013 7:47am
I do love it when you play with words this way!
