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broken bottle role model
I'd like to thank the beautiful devil woman for breathing new life into this piece..
she
shows me generic genetics
in flashbacks
of
one
two
three
the next installment of
tasteless
just-got-out-of-prison-sex
biographies
duck taped
to the bathroom
mirror
and a similie
for unhygienic redneck
philosophies
quoted in
not-quite-white
parallel lines
habitual crimes
define insanity
when you
paint by numbers
of
one
two
three
minus sedated
screams
add a choke-hold
on some downers
held hostage
behind
bi-polar headboards
praising
a special kind
of jesus
in paranoid discretion
a prescription hiatus
for currency
of the preferred kind
one
two
sometimes three
but there's something aesthetic
about abysmal
disabilities
and she's full throttle
eidetic
lit cigarette
I'ma-down-bitch
fuck
me
inside
out
illicit not eccentric
razor blade lullabies
she
shows me what I'm worth
in accidental relapses
of youth
seethed in
what we both need
and somehow I know
there's not enough dope
to keep me high
tonight
she
shows me generic genetics
in flashbacks
of
one
two
three
the next installment of
tasteless
just-got-out-of-prison-sex
biographies
duck taped
to the bathroom
mirror
and a similie
for unhygienic redneck
philosophies
quoted in
not-quite-white
parallel lines
habitual crimes
define insanity
when you
paint by numbers
of
one
two
three
minus sedated
screams
add a choke-hold
on some downers
held hostage
behind
bi-polar headboards
praising
a special kind
of jesus
in paranoid discretion
a prescription hiatus
for currency
of the preferred kind
one
two
sometimes three
but there's something aesthetic
about abysmal
disabilities
and she's full throttle
eidetic
lit cigarette
I'ma-down-bitch
fuck
me
inside
out
illicit not eccentric
razor blade lullabies
she
shows me what I'm worth
in accidental relapses
of youth
seethed in
what we both need
and somehow I know
there's not enough dope
to keep me high
tonight
Published 3rd Sep 2013
| Edited 15th Sep 2013
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3rd Sep 2013 12:36pm
you are making me realise how much work i have to put in still
how poetry is
reaaading liiiisttttt
how poetry is
reaaading liiiisttttt
3rd Sep 2013 1:28pm
And amazingly i have to agree you made me feel like i should brush up on my scribbles or vomit out something sicker than norm . this not only is fucking disturbing in the most erotic and horrid way but oh so fucking poetically perfect i could fuck you to death right now. damn!! this is a forever fav. i just want to choke you right now for the fixation .. wow!!!
3rd Sep 2013 1:31pm
We have all bagged our limits before, but you seem to be on the frontier.
3rd Sep 2013 3:59pm
15th Sep 2013 12:50pm
bi-polar headboards
prescription hiatus
razor blade lullabies
Smart and insightful
prescription hiatus
razor blade lullabies
Smart and insightful
15th Sep 2013 2:08pm
Nicely done to you both.
But Kourt, I think you'd benefit greatly from reading your stuff, it's another means to improvement in writing, voice narration
But Kourt, I think you'd benefit greatly from reading your stuff, it's another means to improvement in writing, voice narration
There aren't many writers in this site who can accurately critique amazing poetry like this and i'm definitely not one of those people. Clearly in a league of your own and absolutely proved it with this piece.
