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Murky Dance
Conscientious to dormant noise
the kernel of certainty in timbre expressed
as we waltz to the sunless sway
The ballet polished,
desire hushed and tied
logic laundered aside
promising our devotion to the ropes
Our naiveté ever-magnified
Contaminated hands lead the dance
We’re ensnared in chaotic cadence
still we stage the expo of our truth on charade status
and twirl to a dissonant system
We approve the dirty tacks fed
Mendacity whet to drain us mute
silent from the burn of agony
impudence engaged in vain
Any efforts to vacate the masquerade,
ghostly covered up,
presuming our significance –we dance to heartless music
the kernel of certainty in timbre expressed
as we waltz to the sunless sway
The ballet polished,
desire hushed and tied
logic laundered aside
promising our devotion to the ropes
Our naiveté ever-magnified
Contaminated hands lead the dance
We’re ensnared in chaotic cadence
still we stage the expo of our truth on charade status
and twirl to a dissonant system
We approve the dirty tacks fed
Mendacity whet to drain us mute
silent from the burn of agony
impudence engaged in vain
Any efforts to vacate the masquerade,
ghostly covered up,
presuming our significance –we dance to heartless music
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Re: Murky Dance
29th Aug 2013 7:47am
...willing prisoners locked in a macabre marathon, perhaps, & the winners get to save their souls...
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29th Aug 2013 4:19pm
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29th Aug 2013 8:18pm
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The imagery and metaphors are as brilliant as they are merky. Is the dance ever about the dance? As if no one on the dance floor knows that the real reason for asking another to dance with them is more about what happens later, swaying in the darkness of the sunless night. outstanding poem! JJ
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Anonymous
30th Aug 2013 4:15am
Wow! This is awesome. Great lines. :)
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Re: Murky Dance
2nd Sep 2013 10:21pm
Somehow this makes me think of Anne Clark
which is a huge compliment from my mouth
which is a huge compliment from my mouth
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Re: Murky Dance
10th Sep 2013 1:07am
The imagery in this is brilliant, it is so lovely yet at the same time very haunting. Really enjoyed reading it! :)
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16th Sep 2013 5:44am
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Re: Murky Dance
17th Sep 2013 3:36am
This was so intelligently crafted,... I'm a wee bit at a loss for words, Golden!
Dimly lit dance floor, for a darken waltz! You definitely write with a 'golden' pen!Xo
Dimly lit dance floor, for a darken waltz! You definitely write with a 'golden' pen!Xo
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Re: Murky Dance
25th Sep 2013 00:25am
A lovely poem, though you'd have to do a line for line explanation for me some other time, the core politics I think I understood.
A real pro at work, that is obvious.
my favorite lines were:
"desire hushed and tied
logic laundered aside
promising our devotion to the ropes
Our naiveté ever-magnified"
A real pro at work, that is obvious.
my favorite lines were:
"desire hushed and tied
logic laundered aside
promising our devotion to the ropes
Our naiveté ever-magnified"
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