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Jonah Davis
He hunted
that is what he loved
this time,
there was a small doe
no point in killing her really,
except he wanted to
he followed her with his sights
tightening his grip on the trigger
he smiled, the forest shook
the birds flew and the doe lay lifeless
he ran to his kill
kicking it with his right foot
she was dead
he didn't know what to do with her
he knew he didn't want it,
she wasn't a prize
but he picked her up and slung her over his shoulders
he started walking back towards his camp
the sun was fading
he picked up his pace
he started thinking about a fire
a nice warm fire and then he thought
for a little doe she sure is heavy
he shifted the carcass and felt it get heavier
the sun began to fall from the sky
when he noticed he had been going in the wrong direction
this had never happened to the hunter before
if he knew anything it was his sense of direction
"What is your name sir" the hunter looked around crazily
"who's there" he shouted nothing, silence
he heard the wind blow through the leaves
and then he heard it again "your name sir, what is it?"
the hunter turned around frantically
looking for the source of the voice
"it is I sir the one who hangs around your neck"
the hunter threw the doe to the ground
her black eyes stared at him and he saw no signs of life
her tongue hung from her mouth, the hunter was miffed
he looked up at the darkened sky and sat beside his kill
no way he was making it back to his camp now,
he was exhausted, he took his hat off and closed his eyes
"my name is Adelpha" The hunter jumped up
he realized the deer that lay dead on the ground was talking,
to him, he stood there frozen in a moment of temporary insanity
"do not be alarmed sir, I mean you no harm"
this cant be happening thought the Hunter
he grabbed his gun and pointed it into the night
and then back at the deer and then at the stars
his mind had been screwing with him all day
hes lost in the woods with a talking dead deer
not even Bad Bob Crazy Claw would believe this
he held his head and looked at the deer, "speak"
he yelled, " did I anger you sir, again I mean you no harm"
"what do you want from me" the hunter asked as he pointed the gun at her head,
"I want nothing from you,
except your name sir, what is it you wanted from me?"
"Did you kill me to feed your family?, or to keep them warm?"
the hunter was silent he never moves his gun
"perhaps you killed me because I was a danger to you?
the hunter remains silent
thunder is heard off in the distance
they both turn there heads towards the north
"don't worry sir the rain won't reach us, not now"
the hunter put his finger on the trigger of his gun
he shot her again
Adelpha laughed well more like howled
the hunter fell to his knees, his ears began to bleed
his gun fell and broke
he reached for the pieces,he whispered "impossible"
"here, where we are, everything is possible sir"
"shut up" he screamed "please! shut the hell up"
the hunter held his ears and cried
Adelpha cried with him
weeping could be heard throughout the forest
even the moon hung low on this night
"sir tell me your name"
"I will not speak to you, you are an abomination"
"am I? or are you?"
the hunter turned his back to the creature
"sir, why did you kill me?"
the hunter held his breath
and he prayed
Adelpha prayed with him
get out of my head thought the hunter
he grabbed her and slung her bleeding body over his shoulders
he headed towards the sound of the thunder storm
Adelpha was heavy and he felt her weight,
like nothing he had ever felt before
still weeping as he walked and he walked all night
Adelpha asked him again " what is your name sir?"
the hunter quickened his pace and she got even heavier
he would not answer the beast, he could not answer the beast,
as the weight became unbearable he was sinking down
Adelpha wrapped her whole self around the hunters neck
and in a terrible voice asked him once again
"what is your name sir"
choking on the words he just choked
the hunter looked to the night sky,
he faced Orion, the great hunter in the sky
Irony held him momentarly
owls began to land around him,
all were screeching WHOOOOOO
wind settled in the trees and just shook
leaves trembled with the the hunter
the forest had turned on him.
Adelpha and the owls were enraged by his silence
only his weeping could be heard
" the hunter cries, and I bleed tears"
Adelpha loosened her hold on the hunters neck
long enough to give him a gulp of unwanted air
" you shall die slowly with me and together we shall rot"
she howled and the owls took there place amongst the trees
the wind stopped and the leaves fell silent
"we are of the same womb Hunter, born of different mothers
in a different time, the necessity of my death,
where was it? why did you kill me? not for food,
not for warmth and not for weapon, you killed me
for sport, nothing more, my death was meaningless
yet yours shall serve greater purpose,
not in this world but in another, your lesson
shall be learned through tales of agony and loss!
I am the loss and this is your agony,
Hunter, my brother, my killer your time has come"
the wind picked back up and Adelpha kissed the hunters head
clouds covered Orion, the sky now black with death
dripped cold rain down from above,
she forced him to take another breath
in that breath the hunter screamed,
and he screamed his name "JONAH DAVVVVVIIIISSSSSS"
the owls took the echo and flew off into the night
taking the hunters name and placing on the tree of death
that is what he loved
this time,
there was a small doe
no point in killing her really,
except he wanted to
he followed her with his sights
tightening his grip on the trigger
he smiled, the forest shook
the birds flew and the doe lay lifeless
he ran to his kill
kicking it with his right foot
she was dead
he didn't know what to do with her
he knew he didn't want it,
she wasn't a prize
but he picked her up and slung her over his shoulders
he started walking back towards his camp
the sun was fading
he picked up his pace
he started thinking about a fire
a nice warm fire and then he thought
for a little doe she sure is heavy
he shifted the carcass and felt it get heavier
the sun began to fall from the sky
when he noticed he had been going in the wrong direction
this had never happened to the hunter before
if he knew anything it was his sense of direction
"What is your name sir" the hunter looked around crazily
"who's there" he shouted nothing, silence
he heard the wind blow through the leaves
and then he heard it again "your name sir, what is it?"
the hunter turned around frantically
looking for the source of the voice
"it is I sir the one who hangs around your neck"
the hunter threw the doe to the ground
her black eyes stared at him and he saw no signs of life
her tongue hung from her mouth, the hunter was miffed
he looked up at the darkened sky and sat beside his kill
no way he was making it back to his camp now,
he was exhausted, he took his hat off and closed his eyes
"my name is Adelpha" The hunter jumped up
he realized the deer that lay dead on the ground was talking,
to him, he stood there frozen in a moment of temporary insanity
"do not be alarmed sir, I mean you no harm"
this cant be happening thought the Hunter
he grabbed his gun and pointed it into the night
and then back at the deer and then at the stars
his mind had been screwing with him all day
hes lost in the woods with a talking dead deer
not even Bad Bob Crazy Claw would believe this
he held his head and looked at the deer, "speak"
he yelled, " did I anger you sir, again I mean you no harm"
"what do you want from me" the hunter asked as he pointed the gun at her head,
"I want nothing from you,
except your name sir, what is it you wanted from me?"
"Did you kill me to feed your family?, or to keep them warm?"
the hunter was silent he never moves his gun
"perhaps you killed me because I was a danger to you?
the hunter remains silent
thunder is heard off in the distance
they both turn there heads towards the north
"don't worry sir the rain won't reach us, not now"
the hunter put his finger on the trigger of his gun
he shot her again
Adelpha laughed well more like howled
the hunter fell to his knees, his ears began to bleed
his gun fell and broke
he reached for the pieces,he whispered "impossible"
"here, where we are, everything is possible sir"
"shut up" he screamed "please! shut the hell up"
the hunter held his ears and cried
Adelpha cried with him
weeping could be heard throughout the forest
even the moon hung low on this night
"sir tell me your name"
"I will not speak to you, you are an abomination"
"am I? or are you?"
the hunter turned his back to the creature
"sir, why did you kill me?"
the hunter held his breath
and he prayed
Adelpha prayed with him
get out of my head thought the hunter
he grabbed her and slung her bleeding body over his shoulders
he headed towards the sound of the thunder storm
Adelpha was heavy and he felt her weight,
like nothing he had ever felt before
still weeping as he walked and he walked all night
Adelpha asked him again " what is your name sir?"
the hunter quickened his pace and she got even heavier
he would not answer the beast, he could not answer the beast,
as the weight became unbearable he was sinking down
Adelpha wrapped her whole self around the hunters neck
and in a terrible voice asked him once again
"what is your name sir"
choking on the words he just choked
the hunter looked to the night sky,
he faced Orion, the great hunter in the sky
Irony held him momentarly
owls began to land around him,
all were screeching WHOOOOOO
wind settled in the trees and just shook
leaves trembled with the the hunter
the forest had turned on him.
Adelpha and the owls were enraged by his silence
only his weeping could be heard
" the hunter cries, and I bleed tears"
Adelpha loosened her hold on the hunters neck
long enough to give him a gulp of unwanted air
" you shall die slowly with me and together we shall rot"
she howled and the owls took there place amongst the trees
the wind stopped and the leaves fell silent
"we are of the same womb Hunter, born of different mothers
in a different time, the necessity of my death,
where was it? why did you kill me? not for food,
not for warmth and not for weapon, you killed me
for sport, nothing more, my death was meaningless
yet yours shall serve greater purpose,
not in this world but in another, your lesson
shall be learned through tales of agony and loss!
I am the loss and this is your agony,
Hunter, my brother, my killer your time has come"
the wind picked back up and Adelpha kissed the hunters head
clouds covered Orion, the sky now black with death
dripped cold rain down from above,
she forced him to take another breath
in that breath the hunter screamed,
and he screamed his name "JONAH DAVVVVVIIIISSSSSS"
the owls took the echo and flew off into the night
taking the hunters name and placing on the tree of death
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