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To be or Not to be..Naughty or Good
Yes that's right
Hard deep thrusts
Not been naughty today
But treat me like I have
I want to walk tomorrow remembering
with lips still stretched
Red and sore.
The empty void where muscles
gripped you tight as you gave yourself
over to my keeping whilst thinking of me.
just like I'm thinking of you right now...
So yes, Thats right
silly me;
My mistake
I've changed my mind.
I have been a very,VERY naughty girl today after all.
Why, What you going to do about it?
Hard deep thrusts
Not been naughty today
But treat me like I have
I want to walk tomorrow remembering
with lips still stretched
Red and sore.
The empty void where muscles
gripped you tight as you gave yourself
over to my keeping whilst thinking of me.
just like I'm thinking of you right now...
So yes, Thats right
silly me;
My mistake
I've changed my mind.
I have been a very,VERY naughty girl today after all.
Why, What you going to do about it?
Published 28th Aug 2013
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28th Aug 2013 7:32am
I thought it ok at best but thats just me a few edits here and there. :)
Not really sure what you mean by attempt though. xD
Not attempting anything here
Not really sure what you mean by attempt though. xD
Not attempting anything here
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- Edited 1st May 2021 7:46am
28th Aug 2013 2:46pm
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28th Aug 2013 3:11pm
29th Aug 2013 9:41am
30th Aug 2013 2:59am
Liked this poem a lot. It's funny, isn't it, that the words we use to children such as 'naughty' or 'bad' have such a lot of erotic power when used in the context of an erotic poem or story? I guess some of us enjoy the feeling of subjection, but without having to move into the S & M domain.
