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Just Love Me
“I can not love you the way you want me to,” she said,
her eyes glazed over with tears.
He looked at her forlornly, his eyes also moist and sad
“Do not love me the way I wish, but the way you wish” he said
as he hugged her, their pain dissolving away
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Re: Just Love Me
Anonymous
28th Aug 2013 5:03am
lovely write sir....
strider
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28th Aug 2013 5:11pm
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28th Aug 2013 6:01am
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28th Aug 2013 5:09pm
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Anonymous
28th Aug 2013 6:05am
Beautiful! Thank you so much. So much truth in so small a poem. And that lovely lovely painting. Thank you.
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28th Aug 2013 5:07pm
Most truths are simple and
straight forward. I just
copy them down as they past by.
straight forward. I just
copy them down as they past by.
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28th Aug 2013 6:58am
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28th Aug 2013 5:26pm
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28th Aug 2013 5:31pm
The text was always purple.
Once you were blind but now your
eyes have been fully opened!
hallelujah and amen
Once you were blind but now your
eyes have been fully opened!
hallelujah and amen
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28th Aug 2013 10:46pm
LMAO!!!! Well.....I was concentrating how beautiful it is. That's my excuse! :)
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Re: Just Love Me
28th Aug 2013 10:24am
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truth->thought->poem
or
feeling->truth->thought->poem
simple and elegant paths
or
feeling->truth->thought->poem
simple and elegant paths
Re: Just Love Me
Anonymous
28th Aug 2013 9:05pm
Lovely....this is hopeless
romantic poetry in its finest;)
romantic poetry in its finest;)
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29th Aug 2013 4:55am
Please don't mention this to anyone,
but this poem is just a transcription
of a text exchange I had yesterday.
Real life is just so rich...
but this poem is just a transcription
of a text exchange I had yesterday.
Real life is just so rich...
Re: Just Love Me
31st Aug 2013 2:06pm
That's true love. To wish for the other and not for oneself. Another heartrending poem, J..
Chi
Chi
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4th Sep 2013 10:34pm
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