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you were right to leave me...

like chil
dren back

then

you grew
up...

Written by dartford

(Paul S...)

Published 27th Aug 2013

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Re: you were right to leave me...

27th Aug 2013 11:31pm

Wistful and poignant.
A well balanced look on the page.
An excellent poem, really like it.

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Re: you were right to leave me...

28th Aug 2013 2:53am

ahhh...back then :)

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