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Seeing Pain
Seeing things without ever seeing
Heartbeat pumps unsteady beats
Holding breath no sound escapes
Sandpaper skin ripped open, gutted
Alone with the exception of madness
Losing everything to loneliness
Clouded mind haunted by empty nights
Wishing to step away from such pain
Heartbeat pumps unsteady beats
Holding breath no sound escapes
Sandpaper skin ripped open, gutted
Alone with the exception of madness
Losing everything to loneliness
Clouded mind haunted by empty nights
Wishing to step away from such pain
Published 27th Aug 2013
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Anonymous
27th Aug 2013 6:21pm
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27th Aug 2013 6:39pm
Sorry for the flashback Theo...I personally have never been depressed but have been around depression!
I appreciate your comment and wish you all the best :)
Thank you ;)
I appreciate your comment and wish you all the best :)
Thank you ;)
27th Aug 2013 7:18pm
I can see what you mean, Theo...very well done Tommie. I can definitely feel this. Crazy pic too! Great job.
27th Aug 2013 7:24pm
Anonymous
27th Aug 2013 7:19pm
nice write and picture tl...so deep this short poem...
strider
strider
27th Aug 2013 7:24pm
Oh the things that are coming into your noggin these days TL :) This piece is a well penned silent scream :D
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27th Aug 2013 10:48pm
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