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Needs~
Locked inside petrified skin
unfaithful mind feasts on the
soul of needful nakedness
Misery has held hands with
memories never abandoning
the other, clasping tightly
Cheating hearts don't hide so
well when face to face with
tomorrows regrets
Whispers linger in empty
skeletons echoing off the
beaten cracked bones
This invisible monster living
inside cries for one thing,
burning passion of another
unfaithful mind feasts on the
soul of needful nakedness
Misery has held hands with
memories never abandoning
the other, clasping tightly
Cheating hearts don't hide so
well when face to face with
tomorrows regrets
Whispers linger in empty
skeletons echoing off the
beaten cracked bones
This invisible monster living
inside cries for one thing,
burning passion of another
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Re: Needs~
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26th Aug 2013 2:39pm
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Re: Needs~
Anonymous
26th Aug 2013 3:24pm
Can relate and well told tl.
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27th Aug 2013 5:16pm
Re: Needs~
OMG Tommie! This is a well written, poignant piece!Stricken with the fear of God was I by this stanza:
"Cheating hearts don't hide so
well when face to face with
tomorrows regrets"
Oh my how you've matured :)
"Cheating hearts don't hide so
well when face to face with
tomorrows regrets"
Oh my how you've matured :)
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27th Aug 2013 5:17pm
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26th Aug 2013 4:57pm
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Re: Needs~
27th Aug 2013 5:51am
Sad write penned well sweetheart. Feel your pain with this one. Thanks for sharing
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