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The Taking of me

Before we laid together
We stripped each other
I followed you quietly
You led me naked by the hand
Taking me under the shower
And Into your arms.
Holding me under the water fall
I didn't want to let go
Fearing I would fall too
Out of the dream
Forgetting it all
Watching it wash away
I didn't want to forget

I didn't want to forget
How you felt to my touch
The way you kissed as the water fell
The way my lips moved against yours
The pressing of our bodies
Giving up my neck for your kisses
sweet and tender.
The soap and sponge
I remember how it moved over me
Letting you help as I stood still
Remembering as I cleansed you
The way you stood patiently. 
We kissed some more as the soap ran down.
You turned the shower off
Taking my hand
Drying me in soft towels
And soft kisses
As I dried you
Repaying the compliment
With my own kisses

I was ready
You carried me
To the bedroom
I kissed you
As I held on
You laid me down
As candles flickered
We laid out
Side by side
Kissing
Touching
Caressing
I opened up willingly
as you rolled ontop
You entered
I moaned
You moved slowIy
I held on for more
My legs splayed
My hands wandering
Quicker movements
I desired
You read my mind
My pleasure was as expected
The best ever
Not one I'll forget
An explosion
All your doing
You didn't stop
Your turn to enjoy
The feeling
I saw it in your eyes
I took you there
with words of love.
Feeling the warm flow
Deep short thrusts
You slowed 
Then stopped
We held on to each other
As we spoke of our feelings
for each other.
Finally we spooned
As I snuggled back
into you as your arm
drapped In protection.
Feeling your arousal
Rise again.
Afterall
The night was young
As I laid on my side
Entering me once again.
as I lay dreaming.
Written by Lookawaynow (Rose)
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