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Urging a perfected unison
Upon the eyes of love
carry everything
intricate...
cogs upon earth
clicking
ticks
notched where spline time
rolls along with speed
intensity
urging a perfected unison
bliss
we skate thin ice
hoping for the freeze
where time stands still
capturing magic
wisdom with age
but should a dance end
your left to begin
feeling weight
enchained
as hands press seconds
constant to your face
aware of how slow
grey clouds drift by
the toy
winding down...
something so slow
disappearing in a flash
hold
hold fast to Your mast
reinforce your keel
looking
to starboard side
where knots are breached
on prevailing winds
out there somewhere
calls
your island paradise
seek this treasure
and anchor time
carry everything
intricate...
cogs upon earth
clicking
ticks
notched where spline time
rolls along with speed
intensity
urging a perfected unison
bliss
we skate thin ice
hoping for the freeze
where time stands still
capturing magic
wisdom with age
but should a dance end
your left to begin
feeling weight
enchained
as hands press seconds
constant to your face
aware of how slow
grey clouds drift by
the toy
winding down...
something so slow
disappearing in a flash
hold
hold fast to Your mast
reinforce your keel
looking
to starboard side
where knots are breached
on prevailing winds
out there somewhere
calls
your island paradise
seek this treasure
and anchor time
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Re: Urging a perfected unison
Anonymous
23rd Aug 2013 6:28am
If only it could always be so. Felt this one.

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23rd Aug 2013 2:15pm
Re: Urging a perfected unison
23rd Aug 2013 8:50am
The dance may end, but the music will play on to other dances. Or you hold fast to your mast and reinforce your keel, for an adventure may await you beyond the blue. Good read Soul.
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23rd Aug 2013 2:16pm
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23rd Aug 2013 10:47am
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Re: Urging a perfected unison
Anonymous
23rd Aug 2013 11:05am
Very sweet write soul...reminds me of the song Southern Cross by CS&N...
strider
strider

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23rd Aug 2013 2:18pm
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Re: Urging a perfected unison
Anonymous
23rd Aug 2013 2:53pm
souladareatease,
For time to be so fragile it holds a lot of weight, and hopefully enough until we find that island! ; ) Thought provoking write.
tornado
For time to be so fragile it holds a lot of weight, and hopefully enough until we find that island! ; ) Thought provoking write.
tornado

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re: Re: Urging a perfected unison
23rd Aug 2013 4:19pm
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23rd Aug 2013 6:22pm
re: Re: Urging a perfected unison
23rd Aug 2013 6:40pm
I will be nice and refrain from my dirty 'ol sailor limericks ;)
Thank You Dear Red-tis true!!!
Thank You Dear Red-tis true!!!
Re: Urging a perfected unison
Anonymous
23rd Aug 2013 7:53pm
Seek and you shall find (or the opposite way}
The journey continues itself, enjoyed the read, Soul!
The journey continues itself, enjoyed the read, Soul!

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re: Re: Urging a perfected unison
24th Aug 2013 8:57pm
Thank You Dear Queen:)
A bit corny of a write-but well so am I -so it's true to form hehe
A bit corny of a write-but well so am I -so it's true to form hehe
Re: Urging a perfected unison
Anonymous
24th Aug 2013 10:10am
like the wisdom of all ages passed lovingly along
a great piece, filled with inspiration and honest, hard-core caring
great write, Soula
a great piece, filled with inspiration and honest, hard-core caring
great write, Soula

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re: Re: Urging a perfected unison
24th Aug 2013 8:58pm
Thank You Miki for praising my corny ways hehee:)
You have been missed!!!
You have been missed!!!