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The eyes can't lie
They tell me the truth
Your color of heart
Your depth of life
I wonder sometimes
Which sight of you
The eyes or truth
Hold me captive
Keep me mesmerized
They tell me the truth
Your color of heart
Your depth of life
I wonder sometimes
Which sight of you
The eyes or truth
Hold me captive
Keep me mesmerized
Published 19th Aug 2013
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19th Aug 2013 5:26pm
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Anonymous
19th Aug 2013 7:39pm
Very much so, Ink....The eyes are the mirrors of the soul!
20th Aug 2013 1:51am
Anonymous
- Edited 20th Aug 2013 1:16am
20th Aug 2013 1:15am
Your short works always pack such a punch. Makes me wonder why I need so many words. Beautiful stuff here.
20th Aug 2013 1:52am
20th Aug 2013 6:57pm
You captured the whole essence of this with the lines: "the eyes or the truth, hold me captive" outstanding!
20th Aug 2013 8:09pm
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