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In Memory of my Brother
He vanished in silence one winter day
an intelligent, good, and serious man
who suffered for more than a year
he died an agonizing death
bereft of what he lived for
Because of my mistakes in life
(my helplessness at its highest)
I could not hold him in his final hours
nor tell him how much I loved him
I could not ask him for forgiveness
for the wrongs I had done him
He died alone in some strange room
and with him a part of me died too.
I pray for you my brother
and ask that you wait for me
as I am not far behind
[this poem is not autobiographical.
It was written for a close friend.]
an intelligent, good, and serious man
who suffered for more than a year
he died an agonizing death
bereft of what he lived for
Because of my mistakes in life
(my helplessness at its highest)
I could not hold him in his final hours
nor tell him how much I loved him
I could not ask him for forgiveness
for the wrongs I had done him
He died alone in some strange room
and with him a part of me died too.
I pray for you my brother
and ask that you wait for me
as I am not far behind
[this poem is not autobiographical.
It was written for a close friend.]
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Re: In Memory of my Brother
Anonymous
18th Aug 2013 6:08pm
Condolences on the loss of your brother.
May you be spared further sorrow.
The poem is elegant - a fitting tribute to a
sibling that you felt for and understood.
A very good write.
Best regards
Kitty
May you be spared further sorrow.
The poem is elegant - a fitting tribute to a
sibling that you felt for and understood.
A very good write.
Best regards
Kitty
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re: Re: In Memory of my Brother
18th Aug 2013 8:18pm
Some bonds, especially those chosen,
can be stronger than blood.
thanks for your kind words
can be stronger than blood.
thanks for your kind words
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18th Aug 2013 7:20pm
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18th Aug 2013 8:17pm
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18th Aug 2013 8:16pm
Re: In Memory of my Brother
18th Aug 2013 10:15pm
Frequently, in our lives, it is our most fervent wish to save those whom we love and cherish, from pain and suffering--especially, from themselves, and especially from, death...a wish--regrettably--impossibly granted.
My heart goes out to you, my friend.
Such a tender, touching tribute to a man whom you obviously loved. Please be comforted in the knowledge that he understood, an forgave you...as loyal friends do.
Poignant Pain Penned Upon Parchment <3
My heart goes out to you, my friend.
Such a tender, touching tribute to a man whom you obviously loved. Please be comforted in the knowledge that he understood, an forgave you...as loyal friends do.
Poignant Pain Penned Upon Parchment <3
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18th Aug 2013 11:56pm
Re: In Memory of my Brother
Anonymous
18th Aug 2013 10:26pm
Wonderful words, these. I read your comment above and can only say I'm so very sorry that your friends didn't get to see.
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18th Aug 2013 11:56pm
Re: In Memory of my Brother
19th Aug 2013 6:43am
I am so very sorry. Your heart and sadness poured out here so beautifully. Very honorable tribute. Sending luv, hugs and prayers. Xoxo
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19th Aug 2013 8:00pm
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