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Marvel
Simply a marvel to my eyes
The sun rises no matter what lies
Are lived through or said
Not matter who cares or is dead
When the sky still shines blue
Putting a smile on my face it's true
No matter what hell I live through
The sun is the same sun I always knew
The sun rises no matter what lies
Are lived through or said
Not matter who cares or is dead
When the sky still shines blue
Putting a smile on my face it's true
No matter what hell I live through
The sun is the same sun I always knew
Published 18th Aug 2013
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20th Aug 2013 1:11am
21st Aug 2013 10:19am
25th Aug 2013 9:53pm
I think this poem is fucking ridiculously awesome. The sun's ascent each morning is rather reassuring. :p
Keep it up FishCake.
Duncan
Keep it up FishCake.
Duncan
26th Aug 2013 5:31am
Thank you! I'm glad you think its so awesome you need to put 2 adjectives! :D
I will try to keep up the good work, I don't do upbeat poems often, but I try! (occasionally.)
I will try to keep up the good work, I don't do upbeat poems often, but I try! (occasionally.)
