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Basking
Pure Light falls
shade in play
pleasant
breeze begins
while butterflies dance
black on blue
Monarch too
float as I
with
...time
from the grind
blessed
with a rest
where all matters
lay right here
as I
sober up
piece of mind
with my head
on
blades of grass
kissing east
quite alive
shade in play
pleasant
breeze begins
while butterflies dance
black on blue
Monarch too
float as I
with
...time
from the grind
blessed
with a rest
where all matters
lay right here
as I
sober up
piece of mind
with my head
on
blades of grass
kissing east
quite alive
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Re: Basking
18th Aug 2013 1:07am
This ink is so beautiful! Xo
I bask in your gift, Soul....
Awesome write!
I bask in your gift, Soul....
Awesome write!
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18th Aug 2013 3:15am
Re: Basking
18th Aug 2013 1:53am
Basking is indeed the word when you soak up nature around you. Good read, Soul.
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18th Aug 2013 3:16am
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18th Aug 2013 1:58am
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Anonymous
18th Aug 2013 2:43am
beautiful soul
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18th Aug 2013 3:18am
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18th Aug 2013 5:23am
sd you seem more to the point nowadays but still ver descriptive. im diggin it bro.........
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19th Aug 2013 3:33am
Re: Basking
18th Aug 2013 6:10am
Pure Light falls
shade in play
That was simply one of the best two opening lines I've read in a long time. The rest wasn't half stepping either.
This poem was just beautiful. I love any kind of nature poem but this amazing. Well done!
much love
G
shade in play
That was simply one of the best two opening lines I've read in a long time. The rest wasn't half stepping either.
This poem was just beautiful. I love any kind of nature poem but this amazing. Well done!
much love
G
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re: Re: Basking
19th Aug 2013 3:46am
You are so kind Dear Glynis-Thank You-You have been missed very much!!!
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Anonymous
18th Aug 2013 8:03am
Wonderful way to wake up, on any occasion!, Soul...Almost could smell the moist air and scents of flowers...
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19th Aug 2013 3:49am
Thank You Dear Queen-those days of soaking all of it in are few and far eh?
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Anonymous
18th Aug 2013 9:21am
I could feel myself slowing down with every word. This is a meditation piece. Beautiful...
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19th Aug 2013 3:50am
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18th Aug 2013 3:03pm
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19th Aug 2013 3:57am
Thank You for visiting me Niki and reading my paltry writes-Your endorsement is a feather in the cap indeed-Mucho respect!!!