deepundergroundpoetry.com
Grief
Sitting here wanting
You by my side
All the while wishing
To run and hide
Wanting so much
To go back to the day
Where, simply your touch
Made all my pain slip away
Now I just sit here
In such disbelief
Because you are the one
Who now causes my grief
You by my side
All the while wishing
To run and hide
Wanting so much
To go back to the day
Where, simply your touch
Made all my pain slip away
Now I just sit here
In such disbelief
Because you are the one
Who now causes my grief
Published 14th Aug 2013
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 4
reading list entries 2
comments 10
reads 1009
Commenting Preference:
The author is looking for friendly feedback.
14th Aug 2013 7:40pm
15th Aug 2013 12:39pm
Ma510,
Thank you for taking the time to read, I am happy that you liked it :)
Thank you for taking the time to read, I am happy that you liked it :)
Anonymous
14th Aug 2013 9:39pm
<< post removed >>
15th Aug 2013 12:40pm
Amanecio,
Ahhh I am pleased you like it sir. Those are my favorite lines as well! Thank you for the comment :)
Ahhh I am pleased you like it sir. Those are my favorite lines as well! Thank you for the comment :)
14th Aug 2013 10:32pm
15th Aug 2013 12:42pm
Thank you Deborahlee, for the comment and for reading. As always I am happy you liked it :)
Anonymous
19th Aug 2013 3:02pm
<< post removed >>
20th Aug 2013 3:52pm
Theo,
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment :) I am happy that you like it.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment :) I am happy that you like it.
26th Aug 2013 1:39pm
grief...isn't ironic Charlie Brown used to say GOOD in front of that word? i never knew ANYTHING 'good' about grief!..excellent, short n to the point inking my beautiful one...
27th Aug 2013 12:33pm
Poetikmind,
The only thing "good" I have known from grief is the writing I produce/d from the feeling. (Gotta say one of my favorite pieces came from the loss of my grandfather.)
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment, it is much appreciated :)
The only thing "good" I have known from grief is the writing I produce/d from the feeling. (Gotta say one of my favorite pieces came from the loss of my grandfather.)
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment, it is much appreciated :)
