deepundergroundpoetry.com
Haiku XXII (inspired by jagracia's wonderful poem Never)
Don't let's play pretend
That affection never ends
Time to say goodbye
That affection never ends
Time to say goodbye
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 4
reading list entries 0
comments 10
reads 765
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re: Haiku XXII (inspired by jagracia's wonderful poem Never)
Anonymous
13th Aug 2013 9:59am
Relationships sure cool quickly where there is no affection. "Time to say goodbye," indeed. Another thought provoking piece, Iris. Magic from your pen my friend. Wonderful words as always! :-)
Peace
Carlene
Peace
Carlene

0

re: Re: Haiku XXII (inspired by jagracia's wonderful poem Never)
13th Aug 2013 10:28am
I'm honored by your lovely words, as always, Carlene! Everlasting love's a dream though a very inviting one. Thank you for the read and for sharing your thoughts with me.
Re: Haiku XXII (inspired by jagracia's wonderful poem Never)
13th Aug 2013 11:06am
We sometimes hang on too long,
not wanting to face the
inevitable changes. Thanks
for the shout-out. Your poem
is quite good.
not wanting to face the
inevitable changes. Thanks
for the shout-out. Your poem
is quite good.
0

re: Re: Haiku XXII (inspired by jagracia's wonderful poem Never)
13th Aug 2013 12:00pm
Thanks for your welcome comment, J.. Inspired by your poem I finally found the words for my haiku. A sensation, haunting me since a certain incident yesterday, finally took shape. Changes, yes ...
Re: Haiku XXII (inspired by jagracia's wonderful poem Never)
13th Aug 2013 12:11pm
Your haikus are always good but they tease the reader desperately as well becuz I for one want more lol
Nice work my friend!
Nice work my friend!
0

re: Re: Haiku XXII (inspired by jagracia's wonderful poem Never)
13th Aug 2013 1:58pm
It's hopefully a good sign that you want more :-)! It's perhaps the particular charm of haikus that they leave enough room for own ideas and because of that for wanting more, too. Thank you so kindly for your lovely comment, Poetikmind!
Re: Haiku XXII (inspired by jagracia's wonderful poem Never)
Anonymous
13th Aug 2013 9:16pm
If one has to pretend, then as you
put, goodbye...short, but very meaningful...
put, goodbye...short, but very meaningful...

0

re: Re: Haiku XXII (inspired by jagracia's wonderful poem Never)
13th Aug 2013 10:25pm
You're so right! Sadly, sometimes it's not so easy to endure the cut. Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving your kind opinion!
Re: Haiku XXII (inspired by jagracia's wonderful poem Never)
19th Aug 2013 10:21am
re: Re: Haiku XXII (inspired by jagracia's wonderful poem Never)
10th May 2014 3:16pm
Dear Brinda, don't know why I do not get word on all received comments! Thank you so much for your kind words!