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Up and Down
Up and down
Life can drag
Up and down
Life feels good
Up and down
No end
Up and down
There's light
Up and down
Can't see
Up and down
Inspired
Up and down
Uninspired
Up and down
Hopeful
Up and down
Aiming for up
Keeping up
Never going down
Looking up
Forward thinking
Patiently
Up
Life can drag
Up and down
Life feels good
Up and down
No end
Up and down
There's light
Up and down
Can't see
Up and down
Inspired
Up and down
Uninspired
Up and down
Hopeful
Up and down
Aiming for up
Keeping up
Never going down
Looking up
Forward thinking
Patiently
Up
Published 13th Aug 2013
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Anonymous
13th Aug 2013 8:09am
As long as it's two steps forward for every one back, you are making headway.
13th Aug 2013 8:11am
13th Aug 2013 11:15am
Wow it's amazing how much of our life moves in that very manner literally ... bowed heads in prayer - then staring at the moon and stars ... the motion of a fork eating ... the steps we climb in a home ... sex ... Okay maybe I'm reading too much into it ...
Sweet ink
LSP
Sweet ink
LSP
13th Aug 2013 11:57am
About how life moves our feelings
Not sure about the sex
Wasn't portraying that xD
Not sure about the sex
Wasn't portraying that xD
13th Aug 2013 4:27pm
13th Aug 2013 4:29pm
15th Aug 2013 10:20pm
There's always some down, but down is up too, in some sense. Just in other direction. The main is the movement itself.
Inimitable ink, Lookaway:)
Inimitable ink, Lookaway:)
