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Light Show 2013*
I'll sit and wait for nightfall
in hopes of a light show
Reaching up as if I could
pluck them from the sky
When I squint my eyes
each star winks at me
In a blurred hurry flashes
fill a section of the sky
Wishing I could wrap the
streaming stars around me
Wear them like a bright
satiny ribbon
I gaze wide eyed so I
don't miss the next show
in hopes of a light show
Reaching up as if I could
pluck them from the sky
When I squint my eyes
each star winks at me
In a blurred hurry flashes
fill a section of the sky
Wishing I could wrap the
streaming stars around me
Wear them like a bright
satiny ribbon
I gaze wide eyed so I
don't miss the next show
Published 12th Aug 2013
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Anonymous
12th Aug 2013 1:57am
nice show tl....strider!
Anonymous
12th Aug 2013 2:57am
You demonstrate such childlike euphoria in this piece.Vicariously exciting this reader at least. I can here your heart saying OOOO and AHHH as you gaze heavenward at natures awesome display. I wish I could see it too. You'll have to later paint a picture with words or on canvas of the spectacular scene.
"The earth, and every common sight,
To me did seem
Apparell'd in celestial light"
Wordsworth
"The earth, and every common sight,
To me did seem
Apparell'd in celestial light"
Wordsworth
12th Aug 2013 3:16am
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Anonymous
12th Sep 2013 1:44am
Thing of beauty
