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He Cums
Supple fingers explore
while whispers cross
his mind
He tells me his secrets
that rest behind
his eyes
When breathing can't
catch heartbeats
he cums
Smothered in clear
white rush of
his lust
while whispers cross
his mind
He tells me his secrets
that rest behind
his eyes
When breathing can't
catch heartbeats
he cums
Smothered in clear
white rush of
his lust
Published 11th Aug 2013
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11th Aug 2013 1:16pm
11th Aug 2013 2:48pm
Anonymous
- Edited 11th Aug 2013 3:22pm
11th Aug 2013 3:21pm
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11th Aug 2013 10:46pm
Anonymous
11th Aug 2013 3:53pm
What RT said TL!
11th Aug 2013 10:47pm
Anonymous
11th Aug 2013 7:13pm
Been there, "When breathing can't
catch heartbeats he cums" described perfectly :)
catch heartbeats he cums" described perfectly :)
11th Aug 2013 10:47pm
Anonymous
12th Aug 2013 7:54pm
A lyrical snapshot of an amazing moment - well done Tommie!
7th Sep 2013 2:20am
6th Sep 2013 10:40pm
Seriously lost my breath - it's my favorite moment with a man and for a moment I felt like I didn't need one!
7th Sep 2013 2:21am
17th Dec 2013 9:36pm
