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Blank
Blank expression,
Blank eyes, no aggression.
Blank smile, no lies.
Blank canvas, so vile.
Dyed in colors.
They are not hers.
Tragedy in silence,
No color exists;
That is her own.
She is alone.
A voice that never reaches farther;
Cries for her mother.
Where is she?
Envying the sea,
Trying to own insanity.
Black bird, blank sky.
Clouds drift, never heard.
Blank land, no gift.
Blank Canvas, kept close at hand.
Blank expression, on a blank child.
Published 11th Aug 2013
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11th Aug 2013 00:46am
This is good! :D I like it. The whole set up is a little weird, but it works. Also a little choppy I think. But, good none the less
11th Aug 2013 5:38pm
11th Aug 2013 5:01am
11th Aug 2013 5:37pm
Thanks! :) I'm glad you do. I was a little worried about this one because I've never written anything like it before.
