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Serenity Walks
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I'm alone,finally
wind kissing my
pale skin,to touch
would be cold
the sun bouncing off
the waves like
little shards of glass
I stand on the waters
edge letting the white
foam cover my feet in
wetness up to my ankles
I pull my roots from
the earth tossing them
into the air letting go
With pointed toe's I
balance along the warm
sand elegantly than open
my wings and float above
As the path for me ends
my feet will travel on
leaving a worn patch in
the earth for my followers
bringing them the serenity
they will need
I'm alone,finally
wind kissing my
pale skin,to touch
would be cold
the sun bouncing off
the waves like
little shards of glass
I stand on the waters
edge letting the white
foam cover my feet in
wetness up to my ankles
I pull my roots from
the earth tossing them
into the air letting go
With pointed toe's I
balance along the warm
sand elegantly than open
my wings and float above
As the path for me ends
my feet will travel on
leaving a worn patch in
the earth for my followers
bringing them the serenity
they will need
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Re: Serenity Walks
Anonymous
10th Aug 2013 11:41pm
nice serenity poem tl...good luck
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Anonymous
11th Aug 2013 3:54am
You really need to read Jonathan Livingston Seagull :) The serenity you describe so well is a theme that runs throughout the book. Beautiful write Tommie :)
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