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Traveller
I have traveled through the night
endured the cold and rain
tread on paths more traveled
by those braver than I
In darkness my sight returned.
What I know and what I see
can only lead me away -
without you is how I must be
endured the cold and rain
tread on paths more traveled
by those braver than I
In darkness my sight returned.
What I know and what I see
can only lead me away -
without you is how I must be
Published 10th Aug 2013
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Anonymous
10th Aug 2013 5:46pm
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10th Aug 2013 5:48pm
10th Aug 2013 8:16pm
10th Aug 2013 9:04pm
10th Aug 2013 9:58pm
The traveller sees the
one he wants recede
into the distance...
for whatever reason...
Really nice poem, jag!
one he wants recede
into the distance...
for whatever reason...
Really nice poem, jag!
10th Aug 2013 10:31pm
11th Aug 2013 4:25pm
I'd love to say something insightful about this beautiful poem but I can't put it into adequate words. A lonely but brave travelor treading on the path of darkness and lost love. That's dense stuff and I like it a lot, J.!
Chi
Chi
11th Aug 2013 4:37pm
